| Reviews for left hands and wedding bands |
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   babzfgm chapter 1 . 3/2 Amazing! They are perfection. |
| raffertysdonna chapter 1 . 3/2 oh wow, alyssa! only you could make this so beautiful and pull on all my heartstrings. the way you write is so special and i can feel actual sparks when i read your writing. i love it, and congrats to you for stepping out of your comfort zone 3 |
| carlota206 chapter 1 . 3/2 This was hot, tender, raw and emotional. All at the same time. Wow! Loved it! |
| Follow-ur-Shadow chapter 1 . 3/2 Amazing! Such wonderful description :D |
| Lifeislikethis chapter 1 . 3/2 This is just so beautifully written. A perfect mix of love and heat. |
| popexpaulsen chapter 1 . 3/2 Proud of you for stepping out of your comfort zone! And it’s no surprise to me at all that you managed to make this as beautiful as all of your other fics. Also ‘the forever that was there all along is amplified, carried in a way that only two people who spent years fighting a gravitational pull could give and take’ woaahhh, your honour, shes a genius |
| AlternateShadesofBlue chapter 1 . 3/2 THIS IS STUNNING! You have NOTHING to worry about. It flowed so perfectly and just right and I'm convinced this is canon. Absolutely gorgeous writing. |
| Letskillallthelawyers chapter 1 . 3/2 So well written, I have no idea why you were so anxious about it! Full of hotness and emotional as well, super good work! |
| Nannalyn chapter 1 . 3/2 Ooof, I wanna cry. This is pure emotion! It's so tender and loving and passionate and hot. It's Darvey and it's everything! "But there is something heavier about this, more weighted and complete. Complete wholeness. The forever that was there all along is amplified, (...)." This! That's it. That's Darvey's wedding night. "Skin on skin and tangled limbs with fingers anchoring each other to their new reality." So beautiful! "Her breath hitches once the unfamiliar metal on his left makes contact with her hip," THIS MOMENT! MY BREATH HITCHED TOO! "...a silent reminder of everything that has changed and all that they have built. Together." Yes. I love this part so much! And oh my lord the smut was just perfect as I already said. Makes me feel all the feels and just superbly written! "His hand moves up to cup her cheek and he kisses her again, this time more innocent than the last but just as whole as Donna has always made him feel." *cryemojiseverywhere* Love love love! |
| Pegtastic chapter 1 . 3/1 This was beautiful and so hot! Bravo on your first attempt at this kind of thing, (you're braver than me) you did an fantastic job. Loved it! |
| PurryCat chapter 1 . 3/1 No need to be anxious! You did great. Thank you for sharing and keeping the rest of us from playing board games. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1 Very nice writing. Totally enjoyed reading it |
| mieh chapter 1 . 3/1 Writing always puts us on such a vulnerable position, but writing sex is something else entirely. I'm glad you were brave to step out of your comfort zone, and you wrote this as beautifully as everything else you write. it was tender and passionate and very true to them and to you. "left hands and wedding bands laced and intertwined; two halves of a whole through this and everything that comes next." Ugh, this hit hard. So beautiful! |
| iamdonnaspecter chapter 1 . 3/1 This is so intimate, deep and beautiful. I'm so glad to you for doing this, stepping out of your comfort zone to do something so amazing. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1 I love everything about this fic |
