| Reviews for The Savior of World |
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narutokong6362032015 chapter 15 . 19h Love this story so far so can u update it |
Baskuu chapter 1 . 8/13 i don't usually write reviews but there are too manny things you got wrong there 1 or 2 mistakes are fine but the plot holes and amount of facts you got wrong. |
moustafashraf69 chapter 13 . 8/11 Also man are you still going to update or did you abandon it? Please update it |
moustafashraf69 chapter 14 . 8/11 Spoilers. Naruto was shown to be faster than light in his six path mode so he can kill Regulus before he can even think about touching Emilia. |
desropter chapter 15 . 8/10 The power of Regulus is hard to put in order. On Paper he has an absolutely broken ability that makes him nearly unbeatable in the world of RE:Zero. The best strategy would be to kill him faster than he can react in order to prevent him from stopping time. He cant defend himself when he can't see the attack coming. His power may be out of this world. But his reaction time is FAR more limited than Naruto who is used to fight at high speeds. I think in his Biju mode Naruto can simply "blitz" him before he can put up any defense. Naruto was after all a good deal faster than the Raikage in his Biju mode. |
moustafashraf69 chapter 15 . 8/9 Please update man, I really love this story. Probably my favourite fanfiction story. |
Stakoza45 chapter 2 . 8/7 Hey man, you alive? |
Featured Reader chapter 4 . 8/7 I give up, this is unreadable. How come you are from the US and write something this badly? |
Featured Reader chapter 2 . 8/7 I would recomend you to copy all the chapters to a Word document, download the Grammarly addon for word and use it to improve the grammar of the story. It won't improve it that much, but it'll be a lot better. And it won't take you more than an hour to do that to all the chapters. |
Featured Reader chapter 1 . 8/6 I don't usually complain about grammar, but there's a lot to fix here. |
pokemonrot377 chapter 1 . 8/6 Interesting |
pokemonrot377 chapter 13 . 8/6 Awesome |
Guest chapter 15 . 8/6 Please don’t add Sasuke. That will just ruin the story with introducing that pathetic piece of trash (Sasuke) into the story. He isn’t needed to support Naruto. |
Kamizuma24 chapter 2 . 8/2 Your grammar is shit to read |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30 This story has potential but your grammar is atrocious... Usually in cases where its this bad its because english isn't the authors native tongue. If that is the case then good job and if it is not find a competent beta reader please. Also elsa is human not a vampire |