i am not saying you are bad at writing stuff like this or anything, but i am just say IIIIIIII have GOT to stop reading dirtystuff

I have gt to stop reading stuff like this

ndz?-

This story is filled with sooo much good Lesbian Shit I cannot begin to comprehend all of it.

Lol

I like how the story progressed, the sweet moments were very fitting and helped really ground them in this situation. However, and this is potentially becouse of the date when this was written. The personalities in the show are the reverse of whats here. Amity while indeed a snooty ritch egoist. Theres the fact that in the show she acts like luz was discribed acting, and she is the one who developes the crush, while luz is oblivious. Still great work but i felt a big disconnect from the characterd becouse of that. I hope you don't take my critique personally, still a good read.

Very intense, loved reading it, keep up the good work

This was put together well, and tied up nicely

“Stardust”? IS THAT A JOJO REFERENCE?!

i dont know why the hell i read this but i did abd i finished it wat tf

I can't wait to see more, maybe you can use bits of tomorrow's "Grom Fright" as a reference

One chapter left...

A dildo. ;3
Also.
Just get a shirt that has an arrow on it as well as a winky and make sure you're on the right side of Amity.

EEEEEE!

shortest chapter ever,
Nice cliffy.
Extreme panic.