Could you add Susan bones( Sophie Turner), and Nym tonks, To Harry’s group of girls?

i love it hope you add more

You need a beta badly. Your grammar and writing style needs work.

I see at the beginning of chapter 2 you are not a native English speaker. Grammarly seems to be helping, but you could still use a betta.

So how could Narcissa have two kids same year?

Love the pairing, but the grammar needs some serious work. You might want to consider getting a beta and/or adding Grammarly to Chrome and putting what you write into a Google Doc to check it before posting.

I am going to keep following this, but likely won't read it until it shows a pretty drastic improvement. You should certainly keep writing though and thank you for sharing!

Hopefully you continue this story as it has some serious potential!

You lost me with this chapter after an interesting start. It looks like this is going to be a good Draco Malfoy story. Quite ridiculous.

You are doing an amazing job with this story even though English is your second language

Really interest to see where this goes keep up the good work!

I'm guessing English isn't your first language find a beta to help you improve your spelling and grammar also it'd make more sense if artys potter relative was female since you could of gone with either Sirius or regulus as his father which gives a plausible reason why the potters would of been approached to raise arty

Other than fraternal half brother twins. Narcissa &/or healer doing some presto paternity test and in a rush doing the Arty baby dump before Lucius finds out.
You've got a problem with the old time to bake a bun in the oven in able to fit timelines with Draco and Harry 3 years prior, being 11 year old sorted yearmates.

Sorry but I second the feeling: "This thought made him sick, no way he wants to be related to that kind of person. ..."
Guess it beats Bellatrix being H-Arty's mum.

c2ICZYS HOSTAGES OF LOVE, get a beta for your glass house.

4h ago c2ICZYS HOSTAGES OF LOVE
plz make him heir off manny different houses and as well pendragon so he kan be king and owner of hogwart their to little story with that i think and plz get a beta thisstory gad big potenstional god luk

plz make him heir off manny different houses and as well pendragon so he kan be king and owner of hogwart their to little story with that i think and plz get a beta thisstory gad big potenstional god luk

nice story so far

please update immediately

Interesting story so far, but you reaaaaally gotta work on your grammar, it's bad