| Reviews for Prima Materia |
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   ShinyKyu chapter 8 . 9/29 Ok, this is REALLY fucking good. Everyone is in character, Ed didn’t just magically fall into the Emerald Forest during initiation like 95% of RWBY crossovers out there, secrets are being revealed at a reasonable pace (not an automatic “I’m actually from another world” or “this is anything and everything about my past and abilities”), and things are explained with ACTUAL SCIENCE (which 1. Makes complete sense when Ed and Al are in a world where Alchemy is NOT the norm 2. Takes a lot of effort to actually research, which I applaud and 3. I’m a fucking nerd that eats scientific explanations for fantasy shit like dessert, I love it) I’m EXTREMELY hoping that a new chapter will be coming soon, although I understand that personal situations, especially with the current pandemic, make things really hard. |
| CookingRice chapter 8 . 8/2 Why make his auto mail so feeble? Wished he could've put up a better fight tbh. Good read though. Keep up the good work. |
| Perseus D. Uzumaki chapter 8 . 7/26 Just read your profile and I hope everything turns out ok for you and your loved ones. |
| Perseus D. Uzumaki chapter 8 . 7/26 I found this and I sort of hate that I did since I can't wait for the next chapter. Although I'm glad you brought up Winry recently since I was wondering if they simply forgot about her. Is Ed going to get new prosthetic or simply try to repair the old one. Love the story and hope you update soon. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/22 this is pretty good |
| SamuraiJack141 chapter 8 . 7/10 Looking forward to more |
| Im A Saggy tarius chapter 5 . 6/28 The pains of reading FMA fanfics. GETTING. REMINDED. ABOUT. NINA. TUCKER. My heart hearts |
| Im A Saggy tarius chapter 5 . 6/28 wow. I've got to say, this is the first time I have seen an emoji in FF I haven't even seen a single emoji on any of the more popular fandom's |
| gogo bananas chapter 1 . 6/27 So good, honestly. cant wait for more dawg |
| SuperApplePie chapter 8 . 6/27 Holy crap, this story is really good! All the characters are in character, there's a good plot set into motion that doesn't just copy RWBY's events, and the narration is efficient and easy to read. I can't wait to read more! |
| JustABoi chapter 1 . 6/26 Hope you update sooner or later, I definitely need more of this. |
| BURRITO LOVER chapter 7 . 6/8 Nicely done |
| Trjz chapter 8 . 6/6 This is awsome thanks for writing it |
| Jak Fortune chapter 8 . 6/6 Cool I hope this story continues |
| Dracus6 chapter 1 . 6/2 Rising of the Shield Hero and Tales of Berseria crossover Naofumi x Velvet Crowe crossover |
