Damn a month, this story just got really interesting

5enemos que esperar tanto bueno

Excellent, keep going.

I just wish Naruto would give Rias Some Payback for getting him fired plsss do that

appreciate the preview but sorry to say to me it really was discombobulated

Grammar issues kill interest in a story long before plot.
Capitalization, punctuation, spelling - all the issues are there.
Characters are OOC - Shukaku getting along with Kurama..?
Contradiction, plot holes, etc...

I could go through and point them all out, but there are so many, whether in relation to canon or just your own story details. And this is just the first chapter...

Hmm, damn a good chapter and now can't wait till the next ones anyways keep up the great work!

Thanks for the update

Sigue eres un muy buen escritor

Somehow wonder what will happen if rias killed by bijudama

The constant "lets keep poking the guy who can snap us all like twigs" is really beyond stupid. If you're going to make gremory that obtuse / incompetent / suicidal, at least give Sona's group some more time in the forefront as the "at least these people have common f'n sense" representation.

Otherwise, I really don't see where you have this Naruto "going" in this story. He's not growing as a person, he's not really connecting to anyone other than Gaia, and that was an established relationship already.

Glad to see another me rias is not getting away with what she did without consequences that right tgere need to be agest.

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Nice please continue and good luck on your studies

i like reading this story but i feel in the battle Naruto using sage mode should of sent Arthur flying with that round house kick instead of standing there as if sage mode is nothing. In sage mode Naruto can lift and throw something that weigh hundreds of ton without breaking a sweat and yet some one who weigh less than 100 kg doesn't have the ability to stick to the ground shrugs off a kick that can crush most things little bit of under playing sage mode there