Reviews for Our Daughter One-Shot
Fire's Son3 chapter 1 . 7/15
are you planning to write another part to this showing the preliminaries?
HighPaladinRath chapter 1 . 7/1
need to be a Fulll story reeeeee
Tru3Ph03niX chapter 1 . 6/17
This is a nice premise for a full story
Needs a continuation. Vote from me
Yohnos chapter 1 . 6/15
I love it so much
And i hate that it's just a one shot (i could read minimum 20 pages of this fic and it wouldn't be enough)
Raizor chapter 1 . 5/8
Y'know, it's sad that this is only an one-shot.
M2R chapter 1 . 4/24
noww I want to see moee
Sixsamchaos chapter 1 . 4/5
Would love to see more one-shots between the Uzumaki family and the rest of the Totsuki cast. Very sweet and cute story.
The Phantom Keeper chapter 1 . 3/26
I know nothing about food wars, but since you wrote this I knew it would be good. The interactions were very heart warming and felt genuine. Please keep up the amazing work.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2
Fantastic one shot. You should really make a full Naruto Food Wars story at some point though since from what Ive seen from Dining with Divinity that would be right up your alley.
KingRyu chapter 1 . 2/27
Can you do a full story for this crossover
Silver566 chapter 1 . 2/27
I'm curious, what are Tosuke Megishima and Somei Saito's opinions of Naruto and Hinata respectively, considering they're big wigs in the prior twos specialization.
Lightningblade49 chapter 1 . 2/27
Would love to see this expanded upon.
Peacemaren chapter 1 . 2/27
I would most certainly not be opposed to seeing this continue further, you know... wink, wink, nudge, nudge, cough, cough, subtle implication for another chapter, subtle implication for another chapter... :p

Good work here, I enjoyed reading such a wholesome fic. Keep up the good work.
SoloChrollo chapter 1 . 2/27
Huh. This is surprisingly really good. Idk what I was expecting but it turned out real good. Fluffs like this make it worth readin
MikeMystery chapter 1 . 2/27
Too bad it's only a one-shot. I'd really like to read more how Megumi will evolve under her father's and mother's training.

Hope you'll think about expanding on it and include more in the future :D

Best regards,
Mike
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