Definitely a interesting read, and clearly inspired by Yami the Gamer Kage. Not that that is a bad thing mind you, just very obvious. There are enough differences to make it worthwhile though. Hopefully this story will have a less rushed ending! I will be watching this fic with hope.

holy crap I love this story. cant wait for your next update.

would have been better without the Pokemon

why pokemon idiotic

really hope that mc wont get sharingan. Uzumaki adamantine chakra chains would be cool

its Title not Tittle

im just in the first chapter and i am 70% sure he is part uzumaki part Saiyan with his black hair and heritage. If he is saiyan, i hope he gets a turtle summon like Guy and Master Roshi

reading through it so far nice

Nice .continue

He has a mother figure there that would probably be there for you through ALL of your academic them yet, you want to go live with a irresponsible, dense, not academically inclines kid? the hell bro? some people would wish for just that little part of your new life yet, oh God damn, I hope he doesn't actually complete the quest

you do know that Sasuke wasn't a emo-dick before the massacre right? just saying

btw "glair "glare"

Y'know that his 6 year old body doesn't produce the hormones for him to react like that for Mikoto? no matter how old his mind is

I don't like how his acting... I mean it'll be alright if he was a little older but...

he should increase his CC that'll be more beneficial in the long run, the other stats can be increased by training and studying, even CC too but eh tbh I don't really see how he'll do it, if he had WIS I would say WIS and INT first or maybe WIS and VIT, the higher his vitality the more he can train and the more points they get increased

Hm. Does he not have ID create? that's a super OP, if used right, skill in the later stages, the time manipulation of it would be worth it just to have, not to mention the dungeons

what's [CH.E.R.M]?

Did you mean CHARM? CHA? Hm...
Oh, wait, is this those energies? Like chakra Mana and whatnot?

how does he even know he is OP for a kid? I mean STR-20 could be normal, or slightly above normal for his age...
I mean he gets proven right but it's not good to assume, what if he instead gets a reality check and actually is really weak
Has the MC ever read The Gamer? I don't get why almost all the authors have them active as if they never heard of it or read it... Or they have them never actually read any of them, even though they supposedly read "every" kind of fic or story out there...

Also, if this is the era of Naruto's generation than they start the academy at 8, 6 was before them

Gamers Body and mind are actually active here? Hm... I mean the body one is useful so that people don't suspect that something's weird incase you get an injury, the mind also
but Everytime you increase your status your body changes, gains muscle, flexibility and stuff like that, this pretty much implies that if he doesn't have Gamers body it, status points, won't affect him, I mean like I get what you're trying to do but you either have to put more thought into it, or explain stuff better

Unless you meant it like this
[Gamers Body (Passive/Active)
Level: Max
Passive:
-Grants the user a body that allows the user to live in the real world according to his status he possesses.
Active:
-While active the user doesn't need normal human bodily needs, such as sleep and eating for survival.]

You know that using (Active) means it's an activation skill right? So if you have the description say "Always active" you should put (Passive) next to the name instead

There's no WIS too? damn, also you don't have your Menu have the [Setting/Option] tab? that sucks, so does it mean he won't be able to auto loot?

The hell are you talking about bro? Naruto's apartment is fucking small, and dirty as hell, why the hell would you want to go live with him? Honestly that's a bad choice, you don't even have fucking money, at least you live for free in the orphanage, sigh

I really hope there aren't any Soul reapers, magicians, or whatever in here, I mean c'mon this fic isn't even on the crossovers for fucks sake!well NVM you already confirmed it, this might just be my opinion but it'll be BS if one of those are enemies, but then it'll be BS too it all of them are Allie's or friendly... ha~

"all my choices will have consequences" the hell? that's part of the real world, even talking to Naruto like this in this chapter pretty much sent ripples through the timeline!

Don't get me wrong, it actually looks like a nice fic I'm just, what, complaining? criticizing? eh don't know, anyways if you want you can just think of this review as a whiny dude complaining about everything that you wrote, and end up ignoring it, haha

anyways, I'll be back, in my next review of course, lol

He's such a brat that it's not funny tbh.
And does EVERY OC fanfic have to befriend naruto ?

He is a saiyan a or atleast half the first hidden boost is zenkai right

no harmen pls.

loving this fic so far! take your time to plan ahead and flesh out the story.
doing great!

this is neat. Like it when pokemon are included, so I'm curious to see which one he'll catch first.