I've gotta say, I'm REALLY glad I gave this fic a chance. In my mind, there's always that balancing act between being too boring and slow to develop, and on the other side being nothing but mindless porn. I admit, I was thinking that this fic was going to land solidly in the latter category but... I was wrong. It was a good story, it was clever, the characters were pretty cool. And instead of the latter chapter's being a boring rehash (same package different wrapper) of an earlier chapter, each was fresh... interesting.

The side-story(s) with Ben, Swift, Rouge, and Kai were great too. Can't wait for the sequel!

Best version of the song. EVER!
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Well hey everyone gets a "slow down" on ideas, but if ya need help I have been doing my own stories and would be willing to help. Otherwise great ending if it doesn't restart again.

"youre toing the right way for a smacked bottom!"
this line made me think of shrek

Chuckles* cant wait for season 2.

And hey,if you cant think up a season 2,well...

Yes a Season Two, I am sure we are missing a lot more species, and a few guest starring ladies from the series. I am sure Ben CAN accommodate them most.

Great sex scenes? Check. Ben reconnecting with one of his necrofriggian offspring in a touching scene? Check. Creative use of various species' unique features? Check. Amusing comedy? Check. Putting Vilgax in his place? Check. Celebrating his defeat by partaking in an orgy with the ladies of his species? Check. Shutting out Kai after everything this version did? Check. Recording evidence of the truth to limit her options for payback? Check. Ben and friends happy and well off? Check. All in all, a good spot to put this story on hold until more ideas come to mind.

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Just like the real Interspecies Reviewers, a "maybe" season 2

Gonna be honest, I REALLY thought when Vilgax first showed up that he was mad at Ben for not inviting him to go to brothels with him and that he would join them on their next brothel visit.
Yes, I probably am insane.

there is a criminal lack of reviewer fics, and this one just scratches every itch. i will say im not a fan of the whole 'sub ben' thing, but it fits with the story so im not judgey, overall i give the fic a 8/10

I really want there to be a season 2, but this still a fitting end for this story

Gotta say this was my second favorite chapter by far, the way Ben stood up to that slag bitch Kai and was finally in the right place to tell her off, and how he took down his oldest arch nemesis in a fast and stylish beat down, it was truly amazing. And I loved that final fuck you to vilgax too, overall guys you did amazing and I hope to see a season 2 pop up in my notifications *applause*

Imagine Vilagax reading the review