Greeting, I finally got a chance to able access the internet in my own limited free time, pandemic have been really hard on me in last few months. But I am so glad to see 12 new chapters, I took time to read them in last few days. I want to say, this has gone so far, I really love it. Hand down best fanfiction to read, rivaled to the "Unnatural Selection" by Auburn and "Second Pegasus Alliance" series by Bluenight. I can't wait to read more chapters, every chapter is just getting much more better. It is sad to see the Genii people is going to die out because of one man's stupidity. I truly hope that the children didn't actually follow Ladon's "order" fully. A lot things can change in 14 years old child's mind, hopefully for better. Its all about "change or die", did Ladon just decided to save up the "hard drive" to preserve the history of Genia? Or its something else? Looking forward to new chapters(s) Hope that Lanteans prepare and armed the Pegasus galaxy as overkill against Naari. I'm still curious about what exactly does Naari really look like, whats their culture is? Are they similar or bastardized verison of Ori or the familiar people? I wonder about how did the survivors of Milkey way exactly experienced? Did they had to become the slaves to the Usurpers like original Jaffas to Goa'uld? Or become blind followers like the people of Ori? Become a food or game creatures like the culled/runners to the Wraith? I am so curious about what the new chapters you will bring!

Wraithkin King? Nice. Love that even though Ladon is the most cooperative Genii, he's still a duplicitous butthead. At least this is not being handled by Kolya... Ugh. Also question. Did anyone from icarus/universe survive the naari? Like at this point I'm guessing we lost the civvies but what about SG personnel and Rush?

As always, I enjoyed reading this chapter but I am a bit confused who Bitterwind is. Did I miss her in a previous chapter?

You are such a great writer!

As always I love this chapter! (I always get so excited when I see that there's a new chapter from you to read!) I enjoyed the bit about the colorful hair and I can just imagine Rikki dying at least part of her hair to match Todd and her sibling in the future. Thanks again!

I love the new wraith and the new chapter! One question, why couldn't River live on animals like Todd did until the end of his pregnancy rather than risk the baby? Anyway, thanks for the great read and I can't wait for the next one!

So glad the ship name Phoenix came back, a credit to the concept. I was so sad when I found out about Hammond's actor and happy at what they did to honor him. But I missed the original name.

Bruh, I'm so sorry about not reading on the same day as it came out. As usual i check the website in erratic rate. Anyways, this chapter is giving me some fuzzy feelings and happy stuff emotions thingy. I really hope they rescue the wraith children so they dont have to suffer then become the new generation of the Pegasus Galaxy or the Atlantis people. Keep writing! I wanna see more, and im not joking, everytime I come to read your new chapter, it keeps getting better! This story plot is so flowing like smooth water( like every action you put in the whole process is like watching never ending awesome episodes). This is a nice treasure to read. 1 millon stars out of 5 stars.

So initially I was hesitant about reading your story because of the John/Todd pairing - not because I have an issue with LGBTQ but just because I couldn't see that being true to their characters. (I still don't completely agree with Todd being a sub but it's your story.) That being said, I am SO GLAD that I read this anyway because I LOVE your story! From the characters to the plot, you are so original and everything is so well written I can't even expresses how much I am enjoying this story. Thanks for a great read and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Great story keep up the good work.

Ah! More! Like I'm sad the world had to blow up, but I'm loving the look into wraith physiology and the "Alteran breeding program"

Can't wait for more chapter. Every chapter I read, the plot gets better, hopefully Todd doesnt really get the morning sickness, that would suck, but that would bring more moments. Beside the Nari and Rival Wraiths, is there any more enemies? (I don't know if we still count the racist/homophobic man as a threat, but eyeing it rn)

Wooo hoo. I love the why you did make this. I like the idea of carrier and sires. Also higher chances of doing same treatment on the young wraiths, but I wonder what happens if the young queens take the treatment... But keep going with John and Sheppard being parents to Rikki. But now I gonna keep the eye out on unknown ship, dude that's little scary. But jeez, I like your plot twist.

Your story was good till the whole Sheppard and Todd thing could have done without that

I can not wait for more! Love it!