Thought it would be good, but meeting mina right off the bat and immediately becoming friends just tells me the kind of quality this story will be. gary stu

Inko and Toshi: Happy night

Mina: Gotcha, bitch!

You should read "Archer" by fencer22 it has the same premise with your story. Just one difference , it's xover with Worm not bnha . Its really good , and you might get yourself an inspiration from it

Good chapter, just want to point out All Night’s real name is Toshinori, not Toshiro.

I like that Izuku’s doing better in his training with All Might, but I do wish that you’d actually SHOW his training and the progress of it.

ERI! So cute! I do wish Izuku could have taken her with him for the first day. We need more Eri.

Is it weird that that’s exactly how I pictured Izuku’s toss going?

Fuck Bakugou.

I feel no pity for Mineta. Only a bit kissed Bakugou isn’t going with him.

I would have liked it if you actually showed the exams. That way we could have gotten a better understanding of how strong Izuku and Mina are. I included Mina, because she’s been training with Izuku so she should have improved and done better than in canon.

This chapter was a bit rushed. You need to work on character interactions and development. My best example is the relationship between Inko and All Might. It came out of nowhere without a hint to it. It basically made no sense.

This fic is a dream come true. Not only is Deku getting Archers powers through a very cool way (having his arm) but also the IzuOcha and ToshInko ships are being teased! Now all that’s left is to include some Fate villains or enemies so Deku can face someone from the Fate franchise he can properly call his nemesis! I’m thinking either Angra Mainyu or Gilgamesh. If Gilgamesh, I hope it’s something similar to the Oath Under Snow thing where it’s not really Gilgamesh as it’s just someone else using his powers. If Angra Mainyu, maybe do something similar to what I hope for Gilgamesh or have the actual character show up and wreak havoc on the MHA world.
It’d also be cool and horrifying (for the characters) if The Shadow from the Fate Heaven’s Feel route because it would add a sort of horror or creepy factor to everything by being this silent monsters that kills people and consumes them without a second thought. Then Alter Servants can be summoned or something like Saber Alter which will be a very emotional and heartbreaking moment for Izuku because of his connection to Shirou which then translates the emotions Shirou would be feeling to Izuku as he would be seeing his old ally/friend/lover turn to the darkness and become a tyrant.

Rushed.

Heh, looks like Izuku is gonna talk to All Might and do everything in his power to keep his mom from dealing with another heartbreak. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Well, it seems like Allmight is going to die.

I'd suggest you fix some of the mistakes in this chapterYou" is very much different from "Your" and "You're" as it directly points out at the person in front of yourself, the former(Your) it being is a possessive word which means it is owned by someone meanwhile the latter(You're) is a shorter word for "You Are".

Also, "Chief" and "Chef" are different. This first is a leader's position, a rank if you will. The second is a profession, a job expressed in cooking or creating food.

No, this doesn't mean anything offensive really. Just wanted to point out the mistakes!

Hey i love this story man and i just love how you gave izuku archer arm instead of a class card i think thats was a much better idea

IzuMina confirmed!?

Well, this was an amusing chapter to say the least. Poor Mamadoriya, has to deal with good natured teasing from a recently made highschool student. She's probably going to faint pretty quickly from overstimulation to teasing. Heh, one can only hope for that sort of situation in the next chapter, if only as an omake or something.

Quick question are you still alive?

great chapter really makes me wonder if he gets all for one