Yooo, I am worried about your health dude. Is everything alright? Pressure in the skull and behind the eyes ain't a joke, it could be serious.

Anyways, I really don't understand if there really is that much hate in the reviews. Most are probably just 14 year old and you can just ignore them right?

Hmm, well... when the chapter is focused on a single event going on, like this one with raven and naruto's talk/fight it's written very well. The pacing is nice and everything, but when the chapter goes from place to place which happened quite a few times earlier in the story it did feel very fast paced.

This chapter felt very nice and slow, only towards the end with raven's tribe did it feel a little fast.

Anyways, I am going on and on. I really like your stories and I sincerely wish for you to remain as healthy as you can be. Please ignore the haters, it does not bode well for your mental health surely!

Can't wait for more on this story. Stay safe and till next time.

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Raven is going to regret that decision.

I like this very much and honestly don‘t understand the negative backlash you get, as far as it can be reasoned with and isn‘t fucking death threats/suicide encouragement, seriously what is wrong with those people.

I like the premise and still with all that happened Naruto is still the dense idiot we love, that when pushed too far is pretty fucking scary. Also thank you for keeping the Truth Seeking Balls, I mean yeah he used two of them to pin down Kuro Zetsu, but why did he lose the other seven as well, it doesn‘t make any sense. Also friendly reminder that Naruto can fly now, I can imagine him forgetting in the spur of the moment at the beginning, but it‘s weird he hasn‘t used it yet.

All in all a good story that I look forward to continuing, also it will be difficult to incorporate the Branwen Tribe, but from what I‘ve read up to this point you‘ll manage that.

So keep writing, I‘ll be on to your other storys now.

I'm assuming Gregor is supposed to be a mix of both Gregor and Sandor Clegane based on the fact that he's definitely not as horrible as just Gregor.

Really love it, please write more if you have the time. No pressure

events are progressing you say, a whole chapter which spans what 1 hour of your story. bah everything is so damn slow and that endless yapping about random shit.

truly taking over the branwen tribe is the worst thing you couldve done. the strong survive and the weak perish, yet they still whine about a broken wall. best be strong then just dont bother me with it.

naruto making a clone army for building a wall... i dunno all of his skills but some earth jutsu could do this in no time

what the hell is going on with your reviews section. I'm confused and I barely even started reading, but there are some reviewers that made actual good points, such as the war in the other world and about Naruto beating the hell out of raven? idk if he would do that but I'm curious as to where this story goes. so good job

Man some people are just like to bitch and whine but I'm glad you like continue this story even with all the kids trying to be emo.

This chapter was great and yes Raven is a coward and pathetic. She claims to be a social Darwinist but only targets civilians which shows how weak she is and her tribe. Plus at least Minato and Kushina died protecting Naruto from Obito and Kurama.

I know he's dead, but imagine: Sasuke, crashed on the Dark Lands of Remnant reached Salem's castle and make her his slave, by torturing her via genjutsu or amaterasu, the terror in her face and the regret for being immortal bigger than ever, would be a sight to behold indeed, sorry for my bad english btw

Fuck naruto and especially fuck Gary Stu dick suckers like you.

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love the story, just want to know is this a harem story

aight this is pickin up some speed now, straight heat chapters, good shii bro