Reviews for With this song of mine (I'll march through the night)
Sister Of The Pharaoh chapter 3 . 5/21
This was amazing! Great job with the characters and showing off the music this way was very creative! Any chance you'd be to write a story where Galo is a girl? Again, awesome job!
Eveleech chapter 3 . 3/22
Yeah the first verse definitely sounds like Galo with his optimistic, fiery, and go-getter attitude! Haha! And the "siren call" is definitely a fireman's siren call since he's a firefighter and all! Heck I would say Inferno is Galo's song!

But I thought the "All my life I've been looking for the place I lost it's what I adore" was Galo's line since he lost his childhood home no thanks to Kray Foresight. And the next line "And all my life been hoping for, a happy life for me" is Lio's line since his life has been miserable ever since he became a Burnish.

I loved how Inferno played when Galo and Lio save the world, it lit my soul ablaze and gave me a lot of heartwarming feels since the Promare are going back to where they belonged after staying on Earth for the past 30 years, so that means no more humans have to suffer from frequent combustions!
Eveleech chapter 1 . 3/22
I was thinking about the lyric: "Uncertain flame of hope I found? Will you lead me back on the right track?"

I was thinking that Galo is Lio's "uncertain flame of hope" given that the camera is focused on him. And yeah, I think that's why Lio(possessed by the Promare) moved forward and caressed Galo's face as if Galo is that "uncertain flame of hope" he found that will lead him "back on the right track."

Also I really liked how you remember that the lyrics: "I will revive your loving heart" "Shed your body" "It's time for you to return to me" plays while Galo is onscreen. Because that's what Galo wants to do to Lio.

And the canon fact confirmed by Promare's scriptwriter, Kazuki Nakashima that since Galo is a firefighter, he can read the flames very well and see that Lio was crying during his anguish-driven rampage.