fucking awesome story man hope you update soon

haha I love this and how this is coming through despite my age... yeah, I'm not really supposed to read rated M stuff, but f-ck that

I really hate summons give him some new armor and useful shit, summons are always just annoying in stories unless they take a super passive role in the background doing tasks for the mc

NANI! A gamer fic where the mc doesn’t pic mate or something close what is this madness!

wait a minute wouldn't Thor be her Brother if she's the Daughter of Odin not Uncle unless she's more than just a demi-god O_O ...cause unless Thor is her Brother Uncle I found a mistake

why his teeth fucked though? I thought Gamer Body made it so that there were no permanent scars or anything, and I think that includes cracked teeth?

Pravus... Your styles are similar

Ok I’ll admot I didn’t expect him to go from some creepy slasher fic looking dude to a horrific beast from some 70s era monster movie. This is based solely from the description in the story obviously and while it sounds less than complimentary I assure you that is not my goal. I am honestly just outright stating that I truly wasn’t expecting you to make the MC so inhuman looking right off the bat. I can honestly say I am curious how that will affect things.

I think Dante should eventually go to the Marvel Universe and get the Infinity Gauntlet and Stones and use it to Augment his body, mind, and soul. Because even though the Infinity Stones don't work outside their own universe the upgrades will be a permanent thing. So he would really only need to visit Marvel once.
Hope to see you update soon and also Lemons are fine.

Story is very cringe and seems to adore sticking swears absolutely everywhere, even when it breaks characters and or ruins the moods of scenes. Overall, the main characters are boring and don't seem to actually have anything about them that makes them interesting. Worth reading? No, the my-name-is-Dante or some other cringy name genre is best kept out of your head. Believe me.

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