i would love a prequel bu t I think the sequel should come first

oh my!

oooh! what does that dream of the little kit hawk had mean?

I hope bushclan can save Spottedstorm and drizzlepaw

dis good. im normally a criticizer, but dis good. I also dont care for apostrophes on computer lol

lol srry its just that leader rymes with cedar. snicker.

this is good. i can tell that applemist is a caring cat who will not stand for injustice.

can you do a part in this where hawk is shown her "prison"?

im just going to give you a tip. dont name ice paw ice frost, dont name turtle paw turtle shell, thats too obvious, dont name flame paw flame blaze and dont make drizzle paw drizzle rain.

don't foxes have a good sense of smell? also, it would be more dramatic if the fox killed a cat thats never been in the books

i have a comment on the prologue. If the mother said there were no clan cats, how come there are?

i think that the chapters should be a little longer. i made that mistake. my chapters are only two pages o_0

theres too many paragraphs and not enough sentences in each one

i dont know why those cats are there plz explain

thats a little too long but its good

Poor Icepaw.i sure hope she is able to become a warrior