Reviews for An Unexpected Journey |
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![]() ![]() Amazing chapter. I cant wait for when she meets Xian its gonna be good one. |
![]() ![]() Wow loved the beginning. They really cant get enough of each other now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! They are so cute together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s interesting to see how Mando sees himself when it comes to the child and Hanna. I also love how close they’re becoming. Especially when he cuddles with her with out the helmet after their fight. And yes I call that cuddling! It’s adorable! So is the meaning behind his actions that Hanna is figuring out. See you next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmmm what a way to start a chapter… *fanning some air* .. and a helmetless Mando breathing into her neck hmmmm.. love that one…. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing chapter, I love how their relationship is evolving. update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! So, a week ago I got myself Disney to finally watch The Mandalorian. After two episodes, I was done for and jumped to Fanfiction since... Well, we all know why. I've been binge-reading your story for the past five days, reading several chapters each night to go to bed. (Hence I always forgot to review because I quite literally turned around to sleep - smiling - after finishing each chapter.) I love the way you portray the Mandalorian, the behaviour, the details of his equipment. Hanna and Clara are also wonderfully realistic and convincing. I'm saving Chapter 17 for tonight, and look forward to see the story unfold! Have a great day! |
![]() ![]() Ooh I hope they used protection! Great chapter. Now that they have crossed the line I wonder what their relationship will be like now... |
![]() ![]() Wow that was amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you wrote this, just enough without really crossing the line. Right on the edge. That takes talent, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow that was really sexy even though it wasnt explicit. I loved the way you wrote it! I wonder if Cara will find out lol. Great chapter, can see Mando isnt used to the intimacy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I like how you it turns out so hot without going into details.. learnt a lot there.. have to re-read more than once to see how you do that.. so I might try something similar for my own writing.. that is if you don't mind |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo lmao I needed that chapter Loved it. About time! Thanks! |