The story seems too random and disorganized

Merci ! Vous avez une belle imagination, j'adore !

Great fantasy AU! I like the play on characters. I did find the ending to be a bit anti-climatic and hoped to have a bit more action, but the storyline felt solid and the resolution sufficient.

Wonderful! But! The end needs a beginning!

Finally! Charles grows up! Great story! Fascinating!

Wow! What a story! Here at Washington State time it's 4:44AM and I should be sleeping but couldn't put this story down! It off? Turn off my Kindle that is! Please be safe!

Oh, love it! Wonder if the Collins will notice their noses grow whenever the cut Lizzie down! Should happen to Lady Catherine also!

Oh had to check this story out before the newest one!

Will there be a follow up? I would like to know what happens next. Great story.

Please let me know when your site is open. I love your stories.

A lovely story.

I'm only on chapter 7 so far, but am enjoying this really unique story.

Thank you for writing this story. I see that this is the end but I am still eager to see what happens next. I hope you have time and health to write more for Part II when you can. I just reread this whole story straight through and I understand much better than I did before.

I am also enjoying the new story you are starting.

I loved this story. I have read Pride and Prejudice fantasy and time travel, but this is definitely a new twist. I look forward to the next installment.

Could you PM me about your website please?

I can't wait for Part 2! Charles has redeemed himself. Elizabeth and Darcy are about to be married. Wow...I am contemplating where this story will take us to next! Kudos for writing such a unique, original wonderful story!