| Reviews for Fame and War |
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pallysAramisRios chapter 27 . 7/17 Oh wow so much happening with the young lad |
Greenlips24 chapter 26 . 3/13 Another character is introduced, the good doctor. A very descriptive chapter, which draws the reader in (despite the use of the modern word "okay," which always jars with me and is distracting - that's just me). Keep up the good work. |
Greenlips24 chapter 25 . 3/13 That was an emotional exchange to stop the Musketeers becoming embroiled further. But she doesn't know this particular quartet! |
Greenlips24 chapter 13 . 3/12 I thought I'd left a comment on this chapter; any way, I think Aramis may be right! |
beeblegirl chapter 24 . 3/12 ‘louisa’ certainly is a force to be reckoned with, Porthos will be glad to see her but I’m sure they will want to know on whose orders has she been released from the Chatelet. Has Athos made a new enemy? |
Helensg chapter 24 . 3/12 I’m thinking Athos may have made an enemy there. |
Greenlips24 chapter 24 . 3/12 Loved Louisa's little game with the Red Guard! Also loved Athos's steady presence and assurance. |
Greenlips24 chapter 23 . 3/12 At least Louisa is out of the frame, being incarcerated in the Chatelet. However, she is still vulnerable, even locked up. Loved the phrasing of your last sentence. |
Greenlips24 chapter 22 . 3/11 Richelleu in true reptilian form. Surely his condition will be an "escort." |
beeblegirl chapter 22 . 3/11 Ooh, what is the one condition that the Cardinal is going to impose, I wonder. |
Greenlips24 chapter 21 . 3/10 So, Capitaine Perrault is a nasty piece of work. The poor servant will obviously tell him where Elle/Louisa is. |
beeblegirl chapter 20 . 3/9 Porthos is smitten, but he’s not stupid. I loved Athos here at the end too. |
Greenlips24 chapter 20 . 3/9 I enjoyed their discussion very much. Louisa has an ally in Pirthos, whether he realises it or not. Athos's acquiescence may be for Porthos, rather than Louisa, but perhaps he is coming around to. This remains a very well written, intriguing tale. |
Greenlips24 chapter 19 . 3/4 Definitely a dun dun dun moment! I didn't expect that! Looking forward to Porthos's reaction. And you are very welcome. |
beeblegirl chapter 19 . 3/4 I think Porthos is really struggling with this woman, it feels like she’s playing him and yet he seems to also feel that there’s some truth but he doesn’t quite know for sure. What will Porthos think about her revelation that she is pregnant? I have a feeling that Porthos may well be having a few disagreements with his brothers about her. |