Wait... Is Amy Sorel from SoulCalibur? Because that's the only Amy I can think of with "vermillion" coloured hair. If it is, you picked a real cutie there. I hope we see her more in the future.

Seems interesting.
Will follow and see where this goes.
Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Stay Safe.

GREAT! You know when I first saw this story searching if there was something new in svtfoe archives, I'll admit I was srsly debating to try... I've seen a lot of shitty works where the main character of the story has suicidal thoughts and damn where they bad... But I've seen your other works and decided to give it a shot... And damn was it satisfying not too much angst and drama... I love it... I'm srsly adding this to my fanfiction reader... Well anyway keep up the good work and hope to see the next chapter soon

Un sándwich encerio ?

Great

Mmmm interesante
Aunque creo que debiste de incrementar su tiempo en él reino de hekk al pasar tanto tiempo comenzaría a olvidar a su familia no del todo sino sus emociones hacia ellos sus apegos u comodidad con sus padres
Así darías un golpe aun mas emocional a su psique
Tiene mucho potencial tu historia

Great story I can’t wait to see how you put together Marco’s harem, Also I hope one day you’ll be able to finish Apex predator, Good luck with your writing!

Mhm, sure... He knows ALL TONGUES.

To imagine that the chain is the octopus arm and that Star is it's mom - freaks me out.

Awesome story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz) (Hope Marco has a big harem in this fic)

Okay...Marco so needs to end up having some 'fun' with Nero and Altera. I mean DAYUM, them and Silea in this fanfic? I'd say her too but Armstrong there might end up being the one to give her some joy in her life after HIM is dead. *is in FGO and has Silea, but she's still Berserker of El Dorado for me*

I'll admit, wasn't sure on who else from FGO you've got here. I recognized Spartacus, but not samurai girl (don't know of any pink haired ones) or ninja/assassin girl.

And so Marco is heading off to wherever. Guess we'll see what comes of that. Star at least is being sensible and not trying to be with him romantically. Guess w'll see what comes of that eventually.

Keep up the good work.

First don't die Snowy and bubba! Second, this is really drawing me in.
All the emotion and characters. I really love the Armstrong family~

Hey there bubbajack! I just reqd this story here, good work. Just like before, the only nit-pick I have is some inconsistencies in relation to canon: The princesses should already know about Turdina/Marco since "Princess Turdina", when he revealed his identity as a princess, takes place before "Sweet Dreams", where Star discovered her nightly portal making. And since Hekapoo mentioned that it means that this takes place after "Night Life".

Thanks for the chapter _.

I love this story

Don't kill yourselves editing these but I want you to know your stories are amazing and never fail to light up my bad days, as they inspire me to write. Thank you.