| Reviews for Pen Pals |
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MorgantheFae chapter 1 . 7/28 Hahaha, i don’t know how the two of you divvied up the writing, but whoever wrote Anna’s letters did a fabulous job. You captured her essence so completely, and it must have been a blast to write. I also love Elsa’s sheer obliviousness to Anna (and apparently Honeymaren) trying to imply she might have romantic interests. Perish the thought! Elsa is completely magnificent here. Good for her. Honeymaren’s POV is fantastic too. |
Pope William T Wodium chapter 1 . 7/12 I have to say, the second half of this story surprised me. As an older sibling myself, I was 100% certain - no doubt in my mind whatsoever - that Elsa was *winding Anna up*. That the hunchbacked wizard (and possibly the weasel-hunter) were entirely fictitious, and that Elsa knew very well what she was doing and having a right proper laugh about the whole thing which each increasingly credulous response from her gullible little sister. Good humor regardless, it's a damn funny story. It just didn't go in the direction I was expecting. |
Jack Inqu chapter 1 . 2/21 ...yep, that's pretty much exactly how I see all of that happening. Well done. :) Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update. |
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 2/18 OMG! CLUELESS ELSA IS FREAKIN' HILARIOUS! Oh! Oh, my poor gut! I'm dyin' here! Had to stop reading a couple of times because I was doubled over laughing. This is the BEST! Absolutely one of the best one-off pieces of writing it has ever been my pleasure to read. The voices were perfect. PERFECT! Long may she reign. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Obviously, this gets slammed into Favorites SO HARD. I'm going to add it to my Super-Favorites list on my Profile. I mean, hot damn! |
Dasgun chapter 1 . 2/18 . . |
DschingisKhan chapter 1 . 2/17 Are they really pen pals if they're related? Around the time Honeymaren started visiting Anna, I expected that they were engaged in Increasingly Implausible Plotting to get Elsa to figure her disaster out; the turn it DID end up taking... well, it was a surprise. |