Thanks for sharing this with us, I truly enjoyed reading it.

This is the best story EVER! Officially cannon. I will no longer accept anything that horrible lady smeyer has written. This is my gospel now. Thank you thank you for saving Jake and giving him the love and attention and happiness he deserves!

Im just getting back into reading FF, youve done a really good job and kept the story amusing and fun. I think Victoria turning and killing Bella's friends a very likely plot line. I alos like that you dont treat imprinting like it solves all of J&Bs problems. I do wonder though about Charlie phoning to check that Emily was definitely going to the concert when Bella is an adult and has graduated High School when he didnt bother checking on her activities when she was a student. Keep up the writing you are really good.

This is a terrific take on the books. I think I like your version better!

I read this all and loved it oh my goodness thank you for making my fanfic dreams come true

This story was beautifully written! It was a pleasure reading your work, and I'm looking forward to that Leah spin-off/sequel/whatever you decide to pursue 3 This Epilogue was the perfect ending to it all, well done :)

That's really something to think about, imagine if the twins had been there the whole time and also phased? *contemplates the saga* Great writing, again!

(don't mind me reading all the updates and hilarious author's notes I've missed) Edward somehow always finds a way to be frustrating.

#RosalieDeservedBetter also I know Charlie's not "in" on everything but even really put him thru it.

This whole chapter gave me chills, poor bb Jacob man. As always, your writing is inspiring.

This chapter hurts man, you got me right in the feels here. You have such an incredible writing ability, I will always enjoy what you have to share!

Great story! Loved all the characters' personalities, and glad for a great ending for Jake. Beautifully written. Glad to see it written even though it's 2020!

This ending was beautiful. I'm crying out of happiness over here.

I’ve been reading straight through and I feel badly for not reviewing but I didn’t want to stop reading. Then I got to this point - the truck scene - and I’m so happy! The whole story has been great so far, just great. Jacob is written so well, he’s just true to the great character he was intended to be, and with the perspective of his thoughts and emotions he’s finally a complete character. His thoughts of being a wolf and his thoughts of Bella fit perfectly with how you wrote him and it’s so much more insight into who he is, that we never had anywhere else. He’s a real person and a wolf and he’s truly in love with Bella. I like the rest of the Pack too, and I like Billy and Charlie. This was a terrible day, why did Bella choose this day to jump off the cliff? It was interesting, and I wonder if Jacob will come back to ask, that he noted Bella looked at peace as she was drowning, calm and peaceful. He should ask. The storm, Harry, Leah and Seth all at once made this a terrible day.

Hoping to finish and catch up. Thanks for writing. Thanks for the entertaining author’s notes too. Did I see smoron somewhere? I don’t think the grammar is a problem at all, don’t worry.

I LOVE THIS! I think you did such an amazing job! The way you write is just so fantastic. I love the direction you went with the story. I agree that smeyer did a lot of things wrong with the story. Like she literally made Jacob fall in love with a new born baby. Thats messed up. Anyways Iknow Jacob is your boy but like... i think you should write a EdwardxBella story too because you write so well! Sorry i just had to say it lol. I hope you keep writing!