I liked it, good ending.

Man, I find this chapter funny! Someone really doesnt like luka! Lol! I like luka by himself well enough but I absolutely hate lukanette. If I even spelled that right! Just thought I'd add an extra comment for this chapter!

I actually really like the idea of Hawkmoth intentionally akumatizing someone and then releasing the akuma.

This was a really good story. I thought the amount of violence was interesting and I never imagined a miraculous pistol. I enjoyed reading your story.

I like the Vulpina upgrade!

I get why you don't like Luka and Kagami, I do... but it's one thing to give a character some salt, and another to give them so much salt that they are completely out of character.

You gave a couple great examples of shows that have had successful couples, but there really is a difference in a show about a married couple, or a family, and a show about high school. If a couple is established at the beginning of a movie or show (such as Lucy and Ricky, or Bob and Helen), then having their drama be couple related makes sense, whereas if they are not a couple at the start, the narrative is more likely to include relationship drama as we see in Miraculous. I'd like to point out here that there are also great examples of old shows that were ruined by the couple getting together (I Dream of Jeanne coming immediately to mind as it's ratings went downhill right after the wedding, despite still having a great dynamic and appropriate couple drama, it never got renewed after that).

I'm sorry that the identity reveal is taking away from your enjoyment, but I think it's important to remember that this is a super hero show, and drama surrounding secret identities and romance are kinda a staple of the genre. Spiderman and MJ, Superman and Lois Lane, the list of superheroes who have relationship drama specifically because of their secret identities is nothing new to the genre, and in some cases it goes on for decades. Miraculous is only cued up for 5 seasons and a movie right now, so... don't worry. It'll happen.

Now, constructive criticism... give a warning when you're writing someone completely out of character so the audience expects it. Also, try to leave your own dislike for the characters out of the narrative flow (like how you said that Luka was in the dirt *where he belonged*. You could have just ended with the word dirt.) It's a bit distracting for the reader to suddenly see the author insert a personal opinion on the character, and can disrupt the flow of the story. I get that to some people it might seem like a stylistic thing, but unless the whole narrative is like that, with the author putting their two cents in frequently, it doesn't work very well.

MVPKnight, that was AWESOME! Now, I know that there aren't many Miraculous Ladybug fanfictions that feature the aftermath of Miracle Queen, but whatever we have here on will have to do just fine. Additionally, I have always wanted to read more fanfictions that feature either Ladybug or Cat Noir killing Hawk Moth, regardless of whether or not it would be a last resort. When I saw Cat Blanc use his Mega Cataclysm on everyone in the blast radius, including Hawk Moth, I always wondered if Ladybug and Cat Noir would willingly kill Hawk Moth, Mayura, Lila, and Chloe to end the threats they posed to the world. Anyway, have a nice weekend. May God encourage you to continue writing fanfictions. And... stay safe throughout the coronavirus pandemic.

How about you join Wikia’s like Ideas Wikia, All Cartoons fanon and fandom Wikia, Fanon Wikia, All Anime fanon and fandom wikia etc.

You can follow this link to see how to join but removes the space first:

community . fandom wiki/ Help : Joining _ a_ Fandom _ community

If Adrien is asking that from Marinette it sounds like he doesn't care enough for her.

Lila is pretty terrible. Her lies are kinda funny with how ridiculous they are and yet people still believe them.

Wow, Night Hollow..intense.

And now the trials and tribulations a couple makes. Onward!

And this is why you tell your partner your alter ego. Wow, clever Gabriel.

I totally understand the frustration of end game couple with in between couples. I'm a huge Rogue x Gambit fan. They finally got married and the comics and had a year long run as Mr and Mrs X-it was the best comics I'd read in decades! Unfortunately, Marvel rebooted.

Wow, you really had Luka lose it. That's one way to get him out of the picture, hope it was satisfying to do that for you. I actually don't mind teenagers having a boyfriend/girlfriend before their final pairing. Not all relationships end badly. I'd like to think the failed courtship helps them to identify a good, healthy relationship.

I did enjoy the fight scene, it was rather brutal. I'm glad no one lost teeth or had their skull bashed it, it seemed a near thing!

What a terrible game, Luka! Don't you know this is an AxM fic? I'm kinda looking forward to the L/A fight scene, but I have a feeling it's about to be interrupted by Hawk Moth.