Name: Micepaw
Gender: She
Sexuality: straight
Appearance: light grey silvery she cat with light grey eyes
Bio: normal apprentice
family: Marshflower(She), Browntail(He)
Future mate/kits: mate, you decide, and kits; Marshkit(Tom, or she), Turtlekit(She), Pondkit.(She or he)

Hey, here's something to hopefully Light up your day. I like this story and can't wait for this story to continue more!

Name: Tigerflame
Age: 26 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: Asexual
Clan: QuickClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Massive dark reddish brown tabby tom with a near ginger underbelly and large claws
(Shorter: Massive dark reddish brown tabby tom with large claws)
Personality: (On the outside) Gruff, cold, confronts others when a wrong/wrongs happen, (When someone gets to know him) shy, uses this outside appearance to drive away conversation, kind to his friends.
Family: Oakblaze and Pinefoot - sisters
Other: He was socially awkward as an apprentice, and he got bullied for it so he keeps to himself for the most part.

Name: Oakblaze
Age: 26 moons
Gender: she-cat
Sexuality: bisexual
Clan: QuickClan
Rank: Queen
Appearance: reddish brown she-cat with a near ginger underbelly
Personality: Bright, loving, sweet, motherly, yet strict when needed.
Family: Tigerflame and Pinefoot - siblings, Longscar - mate, Silverkit, Twistedkit, and Twigkit - kits
Other: She feels bad about the way Tigerflame was treated, but she respects his personal space and doesn't pressure him.

Name: Pinefoot
Age: 26 moons
Gender: she-cat
Sexuality: straight
Clan: QuickClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Dark brown tabby she-cat with dark tabby stripes
Personality: Pushy, very choosy of what she wants, bossy, mean spirited
Family: Tigerflame and Oakblaze - siblings
Other: she has a bit of bias against Tigerflame, as she views his actions as an apprentice as ruining her future with a possible mate.

Name: Longscar
Age: 28 moons
Gender: born tom
Sexuality: trans
Clan: QuickClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Silvery gray tom with a car that runs down from above his eye to the bottom of his right paw
Personality: shy, quiet, closeted, but loving and fatherly, and yet strict when needed
Family: Oakblaze - mate, Silverkit, Twistedkit, Twigkit - kits
Other: Was born a kittypet, but abandoned after two moons by the twolegs, has severe mental disorder with him struggling with separation and the constant fear he will end up lonely.

Name: Silverkit
Age: 2 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: undeveloped
Clan: QuickClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: silvery gray tabby tom with a pale under belly
Personality: Up to you
Family: Longscar, Oakblaze - parents, Twistedkit and Twigkit - siblings
Other: none

Name: Twistedkit
Age: 2 moons
Gender: she-kit
Sexuality: undeveloped
Clan: QuickClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Tortoiseshell she-kit with green eyes
Personality: Shy, quiet, keeps to herself
Family: Longscar, Oakblaze - parents, Silverkit and Twigkit - siblings
Other: She can possibly come closer to Flamepaw? I don't care, but she isn't that special in some cases, she should stink at hunting when she gets older, her battle skills fail, and she struggles to get back up onto her paws after defeat. But she should grow out of that.

Name: Twigkit
Age: 2 moons
Gender: she-kit
Sexuality: undeveloped
Clan: QuickClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: dark brown tabby she-kit with darker tabby stripes
Personality: Up to you
Family: Longscar, Oakblaze - parents, Silverkit and Twistedkit - siblings
Other: none

Hi! Sorry I’ve been gone and haven’t really been reading or writing anything. Nice chapter! Flamepaw’s is still... Flamepaw, as usual! Lol.

Great job so far, keep up the good work, also don’t have people submit OCs for the voice they are meant as a background group. Their leader though is referred to as Haven.

Here are some OCs for you (possibly!)

Name: Lotusbreeze
Age: 34 Moons
Gender: She-Cat
Sexuality: Lesbian
Clan: RainClan
Rank: Queen
Appearance: Beautiful silvery blue tabby she-cat with deep amber eyes and a plumy tail
Personality: She is caring, motherly, sometimes strict, and doesn't like the way that RainClan is seen as lazy or called Kittypets
Family: She is mates with Leopardshine (she-cat), and they got Marblespot (tom) to act as a surrogate father for them. Thy had Vinekit, Pearlkit, and Mistkit
Other: She lets Marblespot act somewhat as a third parent to their kits (father), as she respects him and thinks of him as caring and kind

Name: Leopardshine
Age: 32 Moons
Gender: She-cat
Sexuality: Pansexual
Clan: RainClan
Rank: Deputy
Appearance: She is a long-legged golden she-cat with dark brown and black spots and green eyes
Personality: She is spunky, sarcastic, sometimes hot-headed, and loyal to her family and clan
Family: Her mate is Lotusbreeze and they had Vinekit, Pearlkit, and Mistkit, with Marblespot as a surrogate
Other: She gets into arguments with Frozenstar a lot, as they disagree on things, but in the end, it all works out well. Frozenstar chose her because she knew that they would disagree, but she saw it as a good thing, to push her limits, so to say

Name: Marblespot
Age: 40 Moons
Gender: Tom
Sexuality: Straight
Clan: RainClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Handsome black tom with silver spots and white and gray swirls on his legs, with amber eyes
Personality: Somewhat shy, kind, quiet, he likes helping others, he "strongly dislikes" NightClan for killing his parents, and he doesn't care about the RainClan "look perfect and amazing" thing
Family: Pearlkit, Vinekit, and Mistkit are his kind of kits, as he acts as a father figure for them, next to Leopardshine, and his brother, Dewdrop. His parents were killed in a battle with NightClan
Other: He is very close with his brother and foster kits, they often take turns giving them Badger Rides

Name: Dewdrop
Age: 40 Moons
Gender: Tom
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clan: RainClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Dark gray tabby tom with blue eye and white paws
Personality: Funny, sometimes distant, loyal to his clan, and sometimes strict
Family: His brother, Marblespot, and his sort of niece and nephews, Vinedrop, Pearlspot, and Mistleap
Other: He never really healed from seeing his parents, two beloved warriors, get slaughtered by four NightClan warriors, and he still has terrifying dreams of the event

Name: Vinekit (Vinedrop, as a "thank you" to Dewdrop)
Age: 2 Moons
Gender: Tom
Sexuality: Aromantic
Clan: RainClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: He is a small black tom with a plumy tail and amber eyes
Personality: Shy, kind, caring, and sensitive, his sisters sometimes tease him for being small, they mean well but...(you know kits)
Family: His mothers are Lotusbreeze and Leopardshine, but Marblespot acts as a father figure, and his siblings Pearspot and Mistleap
Other: Whenever "The Voice" appear, he gets taken from RainClan

Name: Pearlkit (Pearlspot, for Marblespot)
Age: 2 Moons
Gender: She-kit
Sexuality: Straight
Clan: RainClan/OakClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Pretty silver she-cat with amber eyes and white swirls on her legs
Personality: Quiet, smart, sarcastic, and funny without knowing it
Family: Her moms Lotusbreeze and Leopardshine, her father figure Marblespot, her siblings Vinedrop and Mistleap, and her OakClan mate Birchstep
Other: When she started to tell her moms about Birchstep, they said "whos the lucky she-cat", as a joke (sort of), but Pearlspot got really angry, and said that she didn't like having 2 moms. She than ran off to OakClan without saying sorry to her parents or goodbye to her siblings and clan. She then apologized at the next gathering

Name: Mistkit (Mistleap)
Age: 2 Moons
Gender: Trans Man (born a she-kit)
Sexuality: Gay
Clan: RainClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Dark gray tom (Trans!) with silver spots, a plumy black tail, and blue eyes
Personality: Happy-Go-Lucky, funny, always up for a laugh, but when it comes to protecting his clan, you better watch out
Family: His moms Leopardshine and Lotusbreeze, his father figure Marblespot, his siblings Vinedrop and Pearlspot, and his mate, Leaftumble
Other: When he came out, he said that even as a kit, he never felt right as a she-cat, that he had been debating when to come out for a while

Name: Birchkit (step)
Age: 5 Moons
Gender: Tom
Sexuality: Straight
Clan: OakClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Muscular pale cream tabby tom with light green eyes
Personality: Brave, loyal, sort of a Lionheart-ish type character
Family: Pearlspot and up to you
Other: Up to you!

Name: Leafpaw (tumble)
Age: 6 Moons
Gender: Tom
Sexuality: Gay
Clan: RainClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: Dark brown tortoiseshell tom with yellow eyes
Personality: Clumsy, shy, trips over his words, sort of a Ravenpaw-ish type character (confidence boost included)
Family: Other than Mistleap, up to you!
Other: After he got together with Mistleap, and told the clan, he grew more confident and sure footed

Thank you soooo much if you accept any of these, so far the story seems really interesting, and my favorite has got to be Breezepaw!

I made a mistake, Halffur's and Archstar's other is supposed to be the other way around. Archstar sided with the voice to gain the rank of deputy, and he uses them as a means to gain more influence. Although no-one knows it, if it weren't for the voice... he wouldn't be leader of his clan. Halffur sided with the voice as a means to an end, he wishes the best for his clan and he finds every death that happened and will happen on his quest to power to be wrong... but necessary.

Name: Halffur
Age: 45 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: straight
Clan: OakClan
Rank: Deputy
Appearance: Massive muscular black and white tom with hazel eyes
Personality: Quiet, yet strong to his clan, smart, but can get reckless
Family: dead
Other: He sided with the voice to gain the rank of deputy, and he looks towards the idea of gaining the rank of leader. Although no-one knows it, if it weren't for the voice... he wouldn't be deputy of his clan

Name: Archstar
Age: 54 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: asexual
Clan: QuickClan
Rank: Leader
Appearance: shady gray tom with cold blue eyes
Personality: Intelligent, ambitious, cunning, sly
Family: up to you
Other: He sided with the voice as a means to an end, he wishes the best for his clan and he finds every death that happened on his quest to power to be wrong... but necessary.

Name: Tigerfall
Age: 35 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: bi
Clan: RainClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: dark brown tom with yellow eyes
Personality: crazy, impulsive, ambitious
Family: rogues
Other: He sided with the voice for his gain and rise to power, he cares not for those who get in the way... only of how many.

Name: Cinderburn
Age: 17 moons
Gender: she-cat
Sexuality: lesbian
Clan: NightClan
Rank: warrior
Appearance: dark gray she-cat with burning amber eyes
Personality: Fiesty, smart, sly, cunning
Family: dead
Other: She sided the voice because it was all she had left, after the deaths of her family she found empathy with the mysterious figures

Name: Slash
Age: 56 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: asexual
Clan: Mysterious group called The Voice
Rank: Deputy
Appearance: black tom with flecks of white in his fur, odd red eyes
Personality: Quiet, impulsive, clever
Family: unknown
Other: He traveled far to reach the clans to spread the influence of the voice, he doesn't give up easily because he is so indoctrinated into the group.

Can the Voice be a following of whatever villain you have planned? Also Shadowclaw is on the same side as Cinderburn. And no, i didn't make them all different sexuality to be villains, i just wanted some diversity.

Sorry for not giving them their warrior names:
Frostpaw - Frostheart
Darkpaw - Darkclaw
Blackpaw - Blackleap
Bramblekit - Brambleheart

Flamestrike. There we go! Voila! Warrior name!

Sorry for not including a warrior name! How about Breezeshine? Feel free to change that, I'm not great with names.

Name: Brightpaw
Age: 9 moons
Gender: Tom
Sexuality: Bi
Clan: OakClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: Tall and thin with a bright ginger pelt and pale green eyes.
Personality: He often acts care free and fun loving, in an attempt to mask his pain(Or he just is that way, he is just a background character after all). He is quite snarky and always has a witty comeback. When in a serious situation he tries to crack jokes to lighten the mood because he doesn't know how to deal with emotions, this leads to looking quite rude. (Him: Deputy? More like deadputy! Normal cat: Our deputy just died, wtf dude.)
Family: Flamepaw(Brother, Deceased)
Other: His brother died early in their apprenticeship after falling out of a tree, he is depressed and has a fear of climbing as a result.

I was gonna make a cat for each clan, but its 3am and I'm tired lol. Feel free to do whatever you want with Brightpaw :/ kill him, change him, whatever.

If you are still excepting a POV.
Name: Frostpaw
Age 7 moons
Gender: she-cat
Sexuality: Asexual
Clan: NightClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: Matted white she-cat with a silver underbelly, silver tabby stripes, and pale blue eyes
Personality: Anxious, jumpy, easily frightened, and likes to pretend she isn't in the same world as some people for the most part. Frostpaw for the most part can seem cold to outsiders who don't know her well.
Family: Snowleap, Shadowclaw - parents; Darkpaw, Blackpaw - littermates; Pinetail - step father; Bramblekit - half sister
Other: She is ridiculed by others for her timid state, her father mentally abuses her and has been doing it since she was a kit. His influence spread to her siblings and it has affected them in mean ways. Snowleap left him because of this, and Frostpaw hasn't healed even though her half-sister tries to cheer her up. Do to her abuse, she doesn't want a mate of any kind. It's cool if she's not a POV.

Name: Snowleap
Age: 30 moons
Gender: She-cat
Sexuality: Straight
Clan: NightClan
Rank: Queen
Appearance: White she-cat with a silver underbelly, silver tabby stripes, and pale blue eyes
Personality: Sweet, gentle, motherly, but has a fierce temper for her former mate.
Family: Shadowclaw - Ex-mate; Pinetail - mate; Frostpaw, Darkpaw, Blackpaw, Bramblekit - Kits
Other: She loathes her former mate, and tries her best to help out Frostpaw when she can. Pinetail loves her and all her kits, and is commonly seen trying to stop Darkpaw and Blackpaw.

Name: Shadowclaw
Age: 34 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: Straight (From hell!)
Clan: NightClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Pure black tom with dark amber eyes
Personality: Manipulative, gruesome, abusive, and he has no respect for any apprentices or kits besides his two favorites
Family: Snowleap - Ex-mate; Frostpaw, Darkpaw, Blackpaw - kits
Other: he is out to kill Pinetail

Name: Pinetail
Age: 29 moons
Gender: Tom
Sexuality: straight
Clan: NightClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: dark brown tabby tom with hazel eyes
Personality: kind, gentle, loving, has a deep respect for all his mate's kits and a hatred for Shadowclaw
Family: Snowleap - mate; Bramblekit - kit; Frostpaw, Darkpaw, Blackpaw - step-kits
Other: He has a hatred for what Shadowclaw has done to all his kits.

Name: Darkpaw
Age: 7 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: straight
Clan: NightClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: pure black tom with dark amber eyes
Personality: Cruel, sly, plotting, a lot like Shadowclaw
Family: Snowleap, Shadowclaw - parents; Frostpaw, Blackpaw - littermates; Pinetail - step-father; Bramblekit - half-sister
Other: loves to bully Frostpaw and hates Pinetail, admires Shadowclaw

Name: Blackpaw
Age: 7 moons
Gender: tom
Sexuality: straight
Clan:NightClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: pure black tom with dark amber eyes
Personality: Sly, like a leader, clever, a lot like Shadowclaw
Family: Snowleap, Shadowclaw - parents; Frostpaw, Blackpaw - littermates; Pinetail - step-father; Bramblekit - half-sister
Other: same as Darkpaw

Name: Bramblekit
Age: 3 moons
Gender: She-cat
Sexuality: Bi
Clan: NightClan
Rank: kit
Appearance: dark brown tabby she-cat with pale blue eyes
Personality: sweet, joyous, bouncy, all ways the "Go lucky" kind of gal
Family: Pinetail, Snowleap - parents; Frostpaw, Darkpaw, Blackpaw - half-siblings
Other: She loves playing games and trying to cheer up Frostpaw.

Thanks! I’m really sick right now and it made me feel a little better to see Flamepaw’s P.O.V. included!

Here's some more:

Name: Mossystorm
Age: 51 moons
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clan: Nightclan
Rank: Deputy
Appearance: Large, bulky, mottled, speckled brown she-cat, 1 blue eye and 1 green eye
Personality: Calm, patient, strict, helpful, immediating to other clans, blunt, cunning
Family: Gorsescar-parent, Sandtail-littermate

Name: Sandtail
Age: 51 moons
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Clan: Nightclan
Rank: Queen
Appearance: Speckled brown she-cat, green eyes, pale ginger tail
Personality: Aggressive, enjoys frightening apprentices and kits, cunning, surprisingly comforting to own kits
Family: Palekit, Larkkit-kits Gorsescar-parent, Mossystorm-littermate
Other: Mate died before kits were born

Name: Gorsescar
Age: 63 moons
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clan: Nightclan
Rank: Elder
Appearance: Large, ragged-furred, bulky, pale ginger tom, amber eyes, battle scarred pelt
Personality: Grumpy when woken, enjoys retelling stories of youth
Family: Mossystorm, Sandtail-kits

Name: Palekit (Palefur)
Age: 5 moons
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clan: Nightclan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Pale ginger-tabby she-cat, amber eyes
Personality: Loyal, proud, observant, mature, cunning
Family: Sandtail-parent, Larkkit-littermate

Name: Larkkit (Larkfrost)
Age: 5 moons
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Clan: Nightclan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Black tom, green eyes, white ears
Personality: Energetic, serious, only wants to play fight
Family: Sandtail-parent, Palekit-littermate
Other: Named afther father Larknose

Name: Cedarfoot
Age: 35 moons
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clan: Quickclan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Long-legged, silver-tabby tom, sunset-coloured eyes, long thin scar on flank
Personality: Flirty, joker, great at making challenges for apprentices, loyal, brave
Family: Blossomleap-mate, Volekit, Beekit-kits

Name: Blossomleap
Age: 29 moons
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clan: Quickclan
Rank: Queen
Appearance: Large, skinny, dark tortoiseshell she-cat, dark green eyes, small paws
Personality: Flirty, gossiper, cheeky, loyal, stands up in what's right
Family: Cedarfoot-mate, Volekit, Beekit-kits

Name: Volekit (Volerunner)
Age: 3 moons
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Clan: Quickclan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Skinny, long-legged, black and white tom, dark green eyes
Personality: Playful, helpful, eager to learn, looks out for everyone
Family: Cedarfoot, Blossomleap-parents, Beekit-littermate

Name: Beekit (Beefur)
Age: 3 moons
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Gay
Clan: Quickclan
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Small, lithe, yellow-tabby she-cat, sunset-coloured eyes, black-tabby stripes
Personality: Playful, caring, listener, helpful, clumsy at times, loud when excited
Family: Cedarfoot, Blossomleap-parents, Volekit-littermate

Name: Frozenstar(wing)
Age: 50 moons
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Clan: RainClan
Appearance: Tall and lithe pale-silver she-cat with well-groomed, long feathery fur and icy blue eyes. She has tufted ears and mane-like white fur around her neck.
Personality: Cold, calculating, and intelligent. She always does what's best for her Clan, regardless of what that entails. She believes RainClan is the only Clan that matters and is quite to go to war if she thinks RainClan will win, uncaring of who will get hurt. She ensures that her kit is well trained, but offers her little warmth, and would sacrifice her in a heartbeat if it meant strengthening the Clan.
Family (Including mate/kits): Willowtail(Former mate) Breezepaw(Daughter) Dewkit(Daughter, deceased) Palekit(Son, deceased)
Other: Complications in her pregnancy caused by continuing to work rather than become a queen led to her kitting early and two of her kits dying shortly after birth. She distanced herself from her family after this.

Name: Willowtail
Age: 40 moons
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Clan: RainClan
Appearance: Tall and thin dark gray tabby tom with a long tail and bright golden eyes. His pelt is short and sleek.
Personality: Willowtail is kind and loyal, and is always willing to put others above himself. He cares deeply for his Clan and the cats in it, and often tries to check in on them and make sure everyone is doing well. He tends to overwork himself, and can come off as clingy.
Family (Including mate/kits): Frozenstar(Former mate) Breezepaw(Daughter) Dewkit(Daughter, deceased), Palekit(Son, deceased)
Other:

Name: Breezepaw
Age: 8 moons
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Clan: RainClan
Appearance: The exact same as her mother, with her fathers golden eyes.
Personality: She tries to be a good warrior, but worries she can't live up to her parents expectations. Breezepaw is somewhat anxious, and has a tendency to over think. At times she seems to be a control freak because she always likes to plan ahead and worries when things don't go as expected. She's quite intelligent and good at planning and thinking things out, but struggles when put on the spot. She is quite kind and respectful, but somewhat awkward.
Family (Including mate/kits): Frozenstar(Mother) Willowtail(Father) (Deceased siblings)
Other:

If Breezepaw could be a pov character, that'd be great:3 it's fine if she isn't, though. I love chapter one, Dropletkit is already an interesting character - But, uh, no offense but I noticed Blazewing's mate is listed as Blazewing.