Wonderful chapter-you're an awesome writer.

Wow, this is depressing.

Aw man I need more of this. I love the angst so much. I mean, it’s making me so sad but I’m also loving it!

Awesome chapter like always! Writers like you are getting me through this pandemic. Thank you!

baby books always portray him as upbeat and altruistic, but i love this side of him. “nothing really matters” sadness, bc when you’ve seen the shit he’s seen, obviously he’s gonna lose hope

yes! i’ve never thought of paul’s view of percy, let alone anyone outside of the greek world’s pov. everyone in the books understands percy’s trauma, but how he deals with it at home is v interesting!

You need to write more. Like, please. I don’t have anything else good to read but this as of this moment... and I’m kind of bored.
This is really great. Just curious, but where is the rest of the seven?

love the angst! no one really writes about percy having issues/depression/ptsd after tartarus and I think you write it really well, especially how Annabeth is handling it and I can't wait to read more percabeth issues and how they handle it.

Great chapter! Love the Annabeth and Malcolm talk. There's really good development of tension in this chapter, too, because she definitely needs to open up and talk to somebody, but it's also believable that she doesn't or can't yet.

I am so scared.
Great writing.

I know he is a fictional character, but I am worried for your version of Percy. He is not coping well and it isn't like he could go see a therapist. They would have him hospitalized as soon as he started talking!

It must be awful for Sally and Paul to try to parent Percy after all he had been through. I cannot imagine how worried they are for their son, especially when they know something horrible had happened to him, but did not have many details of that horrible.

Great chapter! Love the dynamics between all the characters here. And there can never be enough stories with Grover being a friend to both Annabeth and Percy.

Still a bit heavy but I'm here for the lighter moments too, beautifully written. Keep it up!

Please I want my poor boy to get better . Are Percy and Annabeth gonna break up? you've been making so much angst lately I'm getting stressed this is too woke let him see a therapist or a psychiatrist or a psychologist bu make him talk about his depression I don't want it to end badly