Despite switching POVs too much and the format being awful, I do enjoy the creative plot.

Yoo, I love this concept, can't wait to read more,

That was fun.

I'd get that TARDIS! otherwise it destroys the reality that the shop keeper leaves. And I have to assume that the DEATH NOTE Diary isn't basic enough to go into the inventory, otherwise there's no reason not to keep it.

When are you going to post chapters 10-12

Interesting concept, but really bad punctuation. The moment you introduced Claire and Leon, it became exceedingly difficult to tell who was saying what. Divide those in paragraphs for more clarity.

excellent chapter

Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to more.

thanks for leading me to "leveling up only by eating" it's great

I like the story somewhat, but i don't really like the fact that he can't increase his stats, or even gain abilities outside the shop. Maybe i misunderstood some in the story, but it's quite dangerous for a regular human to survive around these dangers.

unrealistic mechanics in games? I would say reloading in most shooters, where you somehow keep the 3 bullets left, and they get teleported to your ammo, also the fact that you can beat most games without sleeping

unrealistic mechanics in games? I would say reloading in most shooters, where you somehow keep the 3 bullets left, and they get teleported to your ammo, also the fact that you can beat most games without sleeping

Keep Going And Thanks For The Chapter

Need more Chapters. The Story it's a very good start and Visit other worlds it's great!

Luck
In games work in loot and crits
And your can increment this stats while your advance in the game
But if you thing about it, its not posible have more luck or less luck that someone because its not posible calculate the random chance of something
In the best of the case you just increment the chance of 5%
To 10% if you calculate, but something like random chances?
Other thing that its not part of this but i read in most histories its endurance
While in the histories the people just treat this like something meanglies to help their perfomance in bed, endurance its more important,. Its help with how much someone can resist damages, how much someone can take before hit the floor,
A example is Fallout NW that help the character if you choice to put implants in your body to increment the stats SPECIAL in the player
A side note in the game its implicate that LUCK its something that cant get calculate so when you try to get a implant of this their just give you a probability calculator
Pd. English its not my firts language so a apologize its something its wrong