Ahh yes. “The next chapter will be Dorothea versus Felix”
yet it’s was everyone but those two. Enjoyed the chapter anyway. IAB

I don't think you paid much attention to their support conversations considering hilda had the Hots for Caspar in most of their interaction and even when they share activities in the game. Lol

Damnit! I wanted to know how the Play went!

El’s the fucking best. I was hoping Dorothea would break her bastard brother’s arms but oh well. This was a very good chapter, my only problem being that you cut it up into three segments, and wasn’t very graphic in comparison to some fics I’ve read lol. If you ever played Persona 5, you’ll understand what I mean by that. Can’t wait for the chapter
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Ever seen Summer Ingrid from FE: Heroes? She’s damn stunning and is actually fairly bigger in the boob department than she looks.

Summer Dorothea is obviously bigger though and don’t even get me started on Summer Byleth. The bikini just makes that rack all the more obvious.

Quick! Call the SWAT Team!

"Red Wine and Fish"

Have that Prince Zorzal wannabe hung, castrated and shot!

*frowns in Culinary Connesur*

"He looks like Zorzal"

Author-san,

Get my Machine Gun

Ths Uranium Depleted Machine Gun

DAMNIT SYLVIE!

Lol. Could you do a fight scene where Byleth accidentally knocks an enemy out when she swings her blade but instead all the momentum causes her huge chest to swing forward and smack the guy out cold and Dorothea doesn’t let her live it down. Either that or a massage where Dorothea tries to get a squeeze at those melons with Byleth constantly trying to block her off.

So I guess you're just going to ignore that Felix was impressed Dorothea swordplay and Said She stronger then anticipated..

Are you forgetting the support conversation with Felix demanded that she fights him

I think you're letting your bias ruin the stories potential in my opinion. I'm not trying to be rude or anything

Okay please stop with the character bashing. Yes Felix can Be harsh. But at Least Show You What You Do Wrong instead Of Mocking You. Lol.. But yeah he can be prick. But

Here are examples of him being a jerk but having a point from tv tropes.

Felix is most notably cruel towards Dimitri, calling him little more than a savage boar. It seems like Felix is just being an ass, but as Dimitri's sanity begins to slip, it becomes clear that Felix isn't wrong about Dimitri. To Felix's credit, he never stops calling out Dimitri on his issues even once it becomes readily apparent that Dimitri is exceptionally dangerous and unstable and is one of the only Blue Lions to repeatedly address the elephant in the room regarding Dimitri's spiraling mental health.
Felix comes off as a real jerk based on his views of Dedue, whom he views as little more than an animal with no will of his own. Again, Felix turns out to have a point when Dedue outright states he would do literally anything Dimitri asked of him, even kill children. Felix's accusation ends up right, but for the wrong reasons. Dedue ultimately knows Dimitri even at his worst would never order him to do such a thing, and so on the Crimson Flower route, Dedue gives likeminded Kingdom soldiers Crest Stones and uses one himself, turning everyone who uses one into Demonic Beasts, to protecting their liege without his consent.
In the ending of his Paralogue, Felix gets incensed at his father for appearing to care more about his honor and duty to the late king (the village was important to Lambert) than prioritizing the lives of his people in danger, which makes his talks about how Glenn's death was an act of true chivalry feel empty. It's implied even Rodrigue acknowledges his son isn't entirely wrong about those observations, but like the above, Felix own feelings leave him blind to his father's own attempts to cope with Glenn's passing.
In his support chain with Dorothea, Felix rebuffs her romantic advances by calling her out as a Gold Digger who is trying to marry into a rich family like House Fraldarius. Her support chain with Byleth makes it clear this is, or at least was, really the case as she outright states it to be her goal.
He tries to tell Ashe to not obsess over becoming a knight to a self-destructive degree, but the way he words it makes him sound like he's telling him to give up on his dream. He clears up the misunderstanding later and admits his personal bias against knights made him too hostile when trying to tell Ashe that.
He snaps at Mercedes in their C-support for remarking he reminds her of her younger brother, telling her he is not her brother and to stop bothering him. It seems she touched a nerve by inadvertently reminding him of Glenn, but he was right that her mothering was somewhat patronizing and not to treat him like a Replacement Goldfish for Emile.

unnecessary drawback to Divine pulse.. it's bad enough that she could not even save her fathet. Which i call Dumb plot stupidity. Because of him being the Greil expy

Only problem was with Sylvain this chapter. His playboy persona is just that, a persona. Sylvain would never act like that when he could clearly see what ‘Monica’ had been through. It was majorly OOC. Otherwise, pretty short, decent work.

I like the fighting very much! :)

Would be kinda sad, if the Edel-whops the Flame Emperor would let her basically best friend die. I like this Divine Pulse drawback. I mean, this drawback surely motivates Byleth to not being careless and thinking like... "a mistake is not really bad"... "I still have the Divine Pulse!"

I look forward to the next chapter and also look forward to some DorotheaXByleth moments! 3

Please keep in mind is completely normal for chracters to wipe out platoons I'm Soldiers by themselves well that applies to the strong characters.

Keep in mind Walhart by himself Wiped out platoons of soldiers in Fire Emblem Awakening and he and Priam are stated to be 1/10 as powerful as Ike.