Oh wow, the first chapter wasn‘t anything I‘ve expected. She‘s a swindler. If you could see my reaction right now!
I think she gets antsy if beeing in a place for too long. Has he the ability to hold her? I don‘t know...I think that will be the drama in this story. And who the hell is Jacob...I‘m ready to find out!
I love this story already...can‘t wait for more!

this is one interesting b ;)

good. yes, interested in more

Well, I'm intrigued. She admits to pulling cons and living by the seat of her pants. It may be adventure and freedom but how can she live without love. She'll always be searching for that, for someone who cares.

This gets even more interesting. I can’t wait to find more about Bella’s past.

I wasn’t expecting that twist. Really intriguing.

It sounds like Edward is astounded by Bella's life history (me too). He is going to have a hard time getting her to stay, ...if he wants that. I really want to know about Jacob Black too. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Didn't expect that. ;) Edward is still very interested and so am I. Giggles... Thanks for writing and sharing.

So, Bella is a con artist. Was she really sold at 16? Is Jacob Black a real person? Is she playing Edward?
Judy

That was an unexpected turn of events

Oh my, Bella has had it rough. No matter how she fluffs it up and shrugs her moms shitty parenting, selling her off to the highest/only bidder is just nasty. Debbie

Can’t wait to read more!

Uh oh. Edward hit a nerve there. I’LL bet he was, and put her to work running this scam. Great chapter. I like this Bella, even though she makes a living scamming ppl. And of course this Edward is a sweetheart.

So excited for more! I can’t even imagine living like Bella does. :)

Her mom selling her that surprised me, she needs to settle down with Edward!