I love the story! I really think it is a long fic
Sorry for my very very bad english

Your Majesty:

So I was going to make some remark about how shameless you were, trying to pass off this story as a K-plus when the mere choice of symbols makes it a T at minimum - and then Harry said the thing about Ginny getting a key, and suddenly I was like, "Oh. Okay, so… either this author is a *complete* pervert, or… is it possible? Has she genuinely not noticed the implications of her own imagery?"

So I'm just going to leave that entirely alone, and limit my comments to the remark that, yes, so far as I can tell, your French is, in fact, correct. Which is a lucky break, considering what a mess Google Translate usually makes, so… yeah, more power to you.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth