Great story I hate to have to wait for the next chapter. But trying to write a story myself I know it is not easy. Thanks for trying & succeeding

compulsive reading hope I can do half as good

Great so far. I'm looking forward to reading more and hoping Scott's sight returns!

the story was so good. i love it so much pls keep writing! xxxxxx

Really enjoying your story.

Amazing!
I absolutely love this story and cant wait for more!

thanks for answering my question i understand now! i love the story pls keep writing more this is now my favourite book well it's not really a book so i will say it's my favourite

Great chapter, I absolutely love this story!
Cant wait for the next chapter!

Thanks for another great update. Hopefully you will give Scott his sight back soon. I love the way you described the feel and smell of the old book x

Beautifully poignant. Very well written as usual.

Beautifully written piece. Now I want apple pie and John x

Really enjoying this story! Please continue!

I love the john effect so cute I hope you keep writing. anyway, I have been wanting to ask you this question for age what is the hydrofoil accident did you write about it or did it actually happen in thunderbirds please let me know. thx

It's nice to see supportive!John. Now, some more Scott bashing?

I loved this chapter there was so much attention to detail and had me glued. Cant wait for more!