| Reviews for Different Chosen One |
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White fox16 chapter 2 . 8/7 Like it so far hope it continues soon. |
sammykordy10 chapter 2 . 7/13 Are you going to update this |
sammykordy10 chapter 2 . 6/30 Are you going to update this |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/23 Please continue love to see more |
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 2 . 6/19 Interesting job on this so far |
gabelou1991 chapter 2 . 6/3 J'aime bien. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/26 Please drop rey. And please continue the Last knight featuring Revan being reincarnated |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/19 A few issues. Your grammer needs work. You keep using characters names multiple times in a single sentance. For example, you used Naruto's name seven times in the first paragraph. I also noticed that in the first chapter you kept using the word 'as'. Just find an editor or someone willing to double check your work and you'll be good. Other than that, not bad. Looking forward to next chapter. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18 Wait wait wait if naruto become a jedi than maybe he will be able to convince the jedi council to change their jedi order to allow to have emotions and feelings for those you love |
kgarz01 chapter 2 . 5/18 Really think you should cut down on the harem. Maybe keep to Ahsoka, Annika(though Anna Skywalker would have worked better), Padme, Riyo, Fuu, Karin, Temari, and maybe Hanabi (possibly after she is taken under Padme or Riyo's wing to be taught how to be a Senator). |
SupremeSongLeader chapter 2 . 5/18 Huzzah Naruto LIVES (STOMP STOMP) AZ23AJ LIVES (STOMP STOMP) Thus began Naruto's Hero Journey. Hmm all alright now we are getting somewhere. Another great chapter update. I approve your Naurto's harem set up, if you want more choices then feel free to ask us readers if you want to expand. And specking of harems, now that you are adding Halo into the mix, is it possible to fit in ... Cortana, Serina, Isabel, Professor Anders, Kinsano, Catherine-B320, Miranda Keyes, Veronica Dare, Sarah Palmer, Linda-058, Kelly-087, and maybe Dr. Catherine Elizabeth Halsey, or etc. Okay look, the Halo options here are entirely up for you to decide. You don't have to use all of them if you are NOT interested. If you already have a grand plan, then I am fine with it. This is your crossover story. Not me. Remember just keep doing what you think is best for your ambitious and awesome crossover story. You are the only author here who can determine Naruto's fate. |
guest chapter 2 . 5/18 No Hinata? |
kgarz01 chapter 2 . 5/17 Just drop Rey. |
Beastyd22 chapter 2 . 5/17 Awesome chapter man this would be a awesome story if you ever get around to finishing any of your stories. |
SPeCTeR-ll7 chapter 2 . 5/17 Nice to see Qui Gon getting a jump on the younglings training. Where exactly are we in the timeline? Can you add hinata to the harem? |