I hope you continue, I love this story. It is so different than other marauder stories I see yet still manages to stick to canon. Good luck with your other projects though

Thanks, nice chapter

Aww hey! I really liked this story but I wish it could still be continued haha! I liked your writing in this a lot and I’ve reread Falling and Catching, and I feel like that one is a bit rushed compared to this but I still like it!

I’m loving this story, it’s the best Maurauders at Hogwarts story I have read and it rings true somehow. Looking forward to the next update!

Haha thanks for updating! I felt bad for James when lily rejected him again :( but I’m excited for the next one!

Thanks for updating! I can’t wait for the next one! Can lily apologize to James? I’d like to think it’s not beneath her to at least apologize to someone!

Aye thanks for updating! Snape is getting a lil creepy imo can’t wait for what happens next!

Ew... definitely seems like something Snape would've done. What a creep.

This seems a good story

Thank you for another great chapter! In love with this

Yayyy! Thanks for the updates! I can’t wait for the next one and is Lily going to see firsthand that Snape supports the dark arts?

I know that a lot of story tell with James growing up for Lily to notice and see him, but in this story you asked yourself what James would ever see in her

Hehe thanks for updating! I liked how Sirius spoke up to Evans because she was too blinded by hate to see that James was injured way worse by Severus...can’t wait for the next update!

This is really, really wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing it! I love the way you've written these characters and I'm absolutely in love with the quality and creative way you've written their stories. You've given such a new, rich version of James' perspective that I adore. I've read stories where he grows into his kindness which - to me - has never felt right. Your James is more true to how I envisioned him to be; a goodhearted, kind person who was just... awkwardly askew in the way he reacted to things/people growing up. God, I can't explain it properly, I'm sorry. I just love that you've made him good and kind, first and foremost. A bit of a toerag, second (and always for a reason). I guess what I'm trying to say: thank you so much for writing this story and for allowing us to partake in it.

Lily really is blind! Argh!
And what did she think was so mean and cruel about his first poem? Bullying her? It was a corny poem, sheesh! However, the rest of his attempts were not cool...