Part of me wants to see Stain murder these fakers. Everyone in the class is a fake hero.

Nice. I love this, but there's too much hugging. Otherwise, it's fine.

OH! I see. So I'm assuming that Katsumi forgot about Izuku, causing him to forget the childhood name. This is very amusingly nice.

HOLY SHIT WAIT A MOMENT! I think I was too absorbed in reading this that I lost track of the timeline! I just didn't think a 5 year old would be capable of choking someone that harshly, but it's all good. Despite that, this is pretty neat.

I don't usually like things like these, but you're gaining my attention. It's very dark and I'm just waiting till Izuku snaps.

HOLY SHIT! That was a very fuckin impactful chapter. You've gained my attention.

That was so goooooodd! I didnt expect Aizawa to join them!

while this is a decent read i have to question some things.

so little izuku gets treated like crap, but the injuries you listed would have long since killed him. how is he still breathing at this point?

and where on this god forsaken planet do five-year-olds go to school already? here in germany you have to be six at least for elementary school.

on another point, why is no-one reporting the obvious abuse? those excuses are flimsy at best.

Gosh don't apologise.

You're the writer here, so if the first chapter is short, so it is.

It's not giving a really good impression of you.

I believe that, we, readers should not influence writers with such stupid standards such as "Oh nOoOoo chapters are to short ! ".

Huu...

Btw it was a good first chapter.

That was pretty sad

Hey I thought that ryuu was the leader, why is she listening to all for one?

Pretty good tbh. Theres some grammar and spelling mistakes I see so far, but other than that, love it!

Since she has that myth quirk why dont you make it so that she gives midoriya a demigod or god physique? Or does that power only works on herself?

:)

Welcome to your first Fanfiction. Hope you are going to enjoy writing and creating your own story.