| Reviews for A Jade Dragon |
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Perseus Apollyon chapter 22 . 5h Seriously, cheers to them. So many dangers, what with Benjen playing life and death with an assassin, Arya being targeted by the shady bun dealer, and Jon tangling with that psycho prince. Might be time for Meleys to grow faster lol, but then again Jon cant rely on anyone but himself. Neither can Benjen, neither can Arya. This will only make them stronger, so hope they survive. Great work. |
Perseus Apollyon chapter 21 . 15h Never watched Good Will Hunting, but whatever gave you that inspiration must be awesome. If this was feudal Japan that dude woulda probably killed himself on the spot, save some fave. Damn didnt know how much I'd like a Savage Sam. Darren isn't falling for any tricks, neither is Arya, glad they know they cant trust anyone in Yi Ti, but better it's the devil you know. At the end of the day, he needs Khiara, like you said tho for now. Dragons are growing up quickly. Also like seeing the political landscape from Khiaras POV. Really gives more perspective. Great work. |
tonywarrior chapter 22 . 7/20 Gran capítulo,, no soy mucho de política XD, pero la parte de asesinar a benjen ufff me s está gustando, me puedo imaginar ha tia donde va a jalar XD, si me equivocó ye aviso y te digo como pensé que sería XD, hasta el siguiente capítulo saludos. |
FangLycan chapter 22 . 7/20 So another author recomened this fic and I have to say I have been loving it so far, it's...refreshing being in a place other than Westeros for once and Yi Ti sound's beautiful and I have been loving the cast of characters it has to offer. Meleys was a surprise but a welcome one and just like how Drogon looks a lot like Balerion I supose she looks like the first Meleys scarlet red scales,pink wings,frills and marking,copper horns and claws and yellow eyes, or at least that's how I see her and if we go by the book rule her fire must be a red pink to match her scales. Intresting that Arya and friends are here as well will be fun to see how they grow, the Sandor at least will get some much needed as seems to have made enemys and hopefully he will use all that he has learned to survive and keep his family safe. Will be looking forward to the next chapter, stay safe and if you ever need a break thats fine by me. |
Jonerys2019 chapter 22 . 7/19 Some more OC females here... nice to see the Hound meeting his match in Lucy Liu XD Arya is gonna be such a badass. |
Jonerys2019 chapter 21 . 7/19 So Sam met his asian Gilly here :D Khiara reminds me of Cersei but less bitter... actually more like a female Tywin. |
warrensenjuUchihaUzumaki chapter 1 . 7/18 I read your comments on season 8 and I have to say THANK YOU! FINALLY SOMEONE THAT AGREES WITH ME. |
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 22 . 7/17 Yep, the layers of complexity make this far more dangerous than the north. There, they could literally get away with just hiring military units to do their dirty work sloppy and brutally. Here... cloaks and daggers, quite literally if you ask me. Sandor's arc is unique, and I think he'll find this doctor to be a far better companion than Beric or Thoros; similar to Meribald though XD Oh, Sansa would truly double over in laughter at seeing Arya finally have to learn womanly pursuits XD That being said, I would think this will require more skill than merely adding on a face. Didn't surprise me that Yujin works with the drug lords. I doubt Jon will be able to protect Arya all the time. Damn Benjen. Better be prepared. |
Syrius chapter 22 . 7/17 And the plot thickens! Im rooting for a confrontation beteren Jon and the Prince but what would that mean for help when he goes back to Westeros! |
tonywarrior chapter 21 . 7/15 Te aplaudo por el capitulo y te agradezco por que claramente se refleja la política, la lucha de poderes, la corrupción, la avaricia y la ansiedad del hombre por obtener más, me gusta este Jon , ya no es tan ingenua pensando que los demás van hacer honorables, sin duda era uno de sus puntos débiles. Y sam uffff el del tipo político seria una buena mano para jon, espero que sandor tenga un mejor final. Tuvo una vida de mierda y eso lo convirtió en lo que es. Excelente capítulo te mando un fuerte abrazo y mucha salud hasta el próximo capítulo. VALAR MORGULLIS. |
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 21 . 7/14 Alright, great job, my friend! First, poor Tommen. He didn’t deserve to die, and fuck Margaery has to be married to that little shit. Will Joffrey take his mother’s advice and fuck painted whores once he gets an heir? Eager to find out. I think this is Sam’s version of escaping with Gilly. He may not have to fight in the snow, but the minefield of Yin’s court is deadly in a different way. He seemed to greatly impress the lovely lady. Kaijin and Gendry make a great pair of bastard friends XD Khiara is interesting. I knew she was more devious than meets the eye, but I understand it. She’s a strong woman, it’s how she has to function in court. Arya is very perceptive. Plus... it likely won’t happen but what if Cersei and Khiara met? I’d be entertained greatly to see Cersei proved she isn’t the hotshot she thinks she is, lol |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/9 I hate catching up to good stories like this because I just crave more. Great story so far. Really like Yi-Ti and its politics in your story. Curious to see what else besides experience that Jon will bring back to Westeros. I’m looking forward to see how you’re going to have Jon and Dany meet up and interact. Not just as a future couple but as leaders with similar and different experiences. |
Jonerys2019 chapter 20 . 7/6 Jon is getting into things way above the simple stuff he saw in the north, while Khiara both seems like an ally and a foe. Exciting stuff! |
Jonerys2019 chapter 19 . 7/6 Holy Shit! Arya, Gendry, and Sandor?! I honestly didn't expect them of all people to show up! I like it! |
lalalamb chapter 15 . 7/2 I kinda expect Chanhee to die, she did reminds me of Ygritte. It's not meant to be. If she lives it will complicate matters once Jon found his aunt or went back to Westeros. Hmmm and I suppose dragons mate with dragons even if it's their siblings like how they say power is attracted to power. |