Please continue this very interesting story. I want to see what happens next.

Love this story

wow, he really thinks this is all some elaborate Role-play despite the fact that he saw a robot person lift up tons of metal like paper, saw another robot crush a robot like a ball of paper? This man is seriously in denial. Or needs a real reality check. I really feel bad that he's among machines who want to dissect him for knowledge. Yikes, feel real bad. I almost wanted to get upset about the androids getting drunk, then I remembered, devola and papola got drunk so it's not outside the realm of possibility. I'm interested, but totally confused as to what possible hope does he have left of living. It's not like androids can instant telelport or anything.

I demand an immediate update to this intriguingly amazing story my talented author!

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Martin: here, ake this kid.

9S looks at the half finished cigar in his hand

9S: I will protect this cigar with my life!

Hahaha just from this very first chapter I already know that this is goign to be an really good and crazy ride.

Loved the chapter and can't wait to read the next one (and sorry for the bad english).

Very exited to see where this goes, hopefully Martin, Adan, and Eve can take off on their adventure as stated below. I’m very curious to see what Adan does and Eve when he gets bored too.

I love how Martin is helping Adan and Eve so much. He acts like such a Dad to them and even refers to them as “children”. Like he clothes them, teaches them, and generally is there for them to guide. HE EVEN SAID HE LOVES THEM AND I CRIED. I found the hug he gave Eve to be adorable and he even hugged back. I find the little moments funny like when Martin went to the bathroom and Adan wanted to follow him. I can see Adan depending on Martin a lot to answer his numerous questions unlike the original Adam who had no actual person to teach him. Seeing Martin slapping some sense out of Adan’s killer tendencies was the best part. I actually loved the moment Adan tries to come to term with emotions and tries to figure out what he feels towards his family. These were the moments I enjoyed the most.

I love their new looks now. It is so cute picturing Eve wearing a graphic shirt with a leather coat. Adan would rock a man bun tbh. I can see them both developing and evolving as different people now.

Loving the fact that Martin goes by Cain now to match his robo family. Adam, Eve and Cain adventures lol. It would be funny if they meet or see more characters with Bible names.

It is also ironic that Adan just realizes he has a creator in N2. That makes me wonder if Adam would feel vengeful towards them for his and Eve’s suffering. I remember that in the supplementary materials that he hated his creators for putting him in a path where he had nobody to guide him. I agree with Martin that it is creepy they are listening and watching all their interactions up to that point. I think for now he would be ok and they are just observing them for what they all are going to do.

Ooo. We finally get to meet the other twins Devola and Popola. I can’t wait to see how they will respond to Martin knowing he is human. I can see them fussing over him and his injuries. It would be funny if they ended up with the Bible fam on their road trip and being like the Moms to Martin’s Dad vibes. I can see that being a better alternative than them staying at the Resistance camps where they are treated like shit.

I hope that Eve is doing ok by himself. I really pray that he won’t get into too much trouble lol. I really loved this chapter! Thank you so much for writing this.

im interested here i find some oddities in the narration style but the ideas here are exciting

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Found this story out of the blue and looks promising. My advice would be to have a general idea where you want to take this tory and have a solid foundation.

I find kuoneki's comment agreeable and I wonder how Adam would deviate from cannon wise. He might find humanity interesting but not to the obsessive he had originally. I wonder how the androids would react to having a human side with them, probably not well.

Hope you continue this story and have a nice day.

Poor Martin getting hurt and that must be painful. He can never get a break omg. Also Martin sharing some information making the androids think more clearly into their situation is going to get major backlash as the Commander and the Army of Humanity are going to "remove" people that question their cause or know too much. He is both lucky and cursed that he is human, but the other androids would want to capture him quickly.

So now it is the adventures of Martin, Adan and Eve on their manly adventures in surviving the cruel world of Yoko Taro while on the run from everyone. I also like how Martin names Adam "Adan" and he just uses the name as his own now. I wonder how much change can happen with his name different and how he is going to develop as a person as opposed to the Adam in the game. Adam is very interested and obsessed with humans to study them. Now with Martin nearby he can get some questions answered and whether that would satisfy him or not can change how he sees the world and humanity itself. I can already see Adan learning from Martin as he finally has someone to learn from and copy as he makes similar facial expressions like Martin. Tho I worry since I read Adan reading a lovecrafian book and hope he doesn't put what he reads from that to use ... I like the bit where (I believe it is) Eve singing along with Martin and thought that was cute. I hope that both brothers can stick by him and not kill him since they do learn stuff from him. Martin can be a good friend or fellow teacher or "brother" or "father" to them.

This makes me wonder how N2 is reacting to all this. They probably know about Martin now that Adan and Eve are connected to the machine network and are with him. I can't wait to see them try to talk to him. Lets hope they will stay neutral or "friendly".

Martin being on the side of the machines would be very interesting. An actual human being on their side can make them more powerful as the androids lost their "god" to their enemy. I wonder how the androids are going to be once they found out their enemy stole their god from them. I don't think they would be too mad at the two androids and pods deaths as they do have backups. They can be replaced but Martin is not. The androids are going to send so many squads to find Martin and company so they better run or hide far away.

Anyways my ramblings aside this was such a good chapter. Thank you for writing this!I love it quite a lot.

I hope that Martin meant to say Adam but was too concussed to properly speak so he confusedly mumbled Adan instead of the correct name which is Adam.

Also there is a difference between missing things and/or being in denial... Or just being objectively stupid. So far Martin has done nothing but lose points with me, let's hope he'll massively improve his...everything in the coming chapters.

cool story, unfortunately it seems he has fell in with the wrong crowd lol

I'm diggin this story gonna be interesting to see how it turns out for the guy. Looking forward to seeing more.