Reviews for Chronicles of Harry Potter
Guest chapter 16 . 10/9
Great story and await your continuance.
Spazzman29 chapter 16 . 10/6
I thought Narcissa had an infidelity clause in her marriage contract yet she has quite a few lovers. There are more lesbian affairs in this than actual relationships and it is getting kind of ridiculous.

I have a feeling you are going to overpower Dumbledore and Voldemort to a ridiculous degree.
Spazzman29 chapter 9 . 10/5
Your aging of Gabrielle doesn't work at said she was around 8 last chapter but if she was born when Fleur was 3 she'd be 11.
Spazzman29 chapter 4 . 10/5
At least you know that you have hit just about every cliche thing missing is the apartment trunk.
darkpegasuzz chapter 16 . 10/1
Nice story, though you should work on your spelling alot of small mistakes were made.
richard333 chapter 16 . 9/29
good chapter
dragun95 chapter 1 . 9/29
You forgot to say that he can fly without a broom, that he is a descendant of Arthur and Merlin, that he can transform into supersaiyan 7, that he has a 15-inch penis and that by divine right he can fuck any witch he wants, seriously yes that's not a character OP I don't know what it will be XD
YaoiHellian chapter 16 . 9/28
Odd as hell but I'm very interested in seeing where this goes. Also weirdly enough I'm using the cast of Merlin as my mental stand ins for your characters...kinda makes me feel bad. Anyways, hope to read more soon.
Ernest M Diaz chapter 16 . 9/25
You have such an amazing talent for writing and weaving the story together I'm really glad i found this treasure of a story i love the way you vilified Merlin the way you did it makes it so belivible so see him doing something like this to magicals. Good luck with your exams I hope you do well
Guest chapter 16 . 9/24
Whilst I'm all for characters getting some action, blue balling the MC never really sits right with me. Anyway on the topic of animagus form I can't really give a good answer to that since dragons are already used by the tip top magicals (p. AN can you be more clear on where modern magical stand against older ones? From my understanding the level required to be arch mage has significantly decreased yet Harry went to a strip club out of stress for having to fight Dumbledore and such when he has access to the dark lady herself as a teacher). Anything based on a snake won't work since his personality whilst cunning isn't his most defining characteristic, and theres no telling what incubus lineage does to the form you choose, so my suggestion is either a big ass western dragon, a dragon human hybrid or a devil human hybrid like devil may cry's forms, failing any of those there's the raiju, raijins lightning dog/wolf/beast companion from Japanese mythology, which might work well with having multiple depictions and lightning powers to contrast with Harry's metamorph magic and favouritism for lightning. Have a nice one m8, looking forward to more.
Me Myself and I chapter 16 . 9/24
So, I take Harry is going to have a threesome with Narcissa and Marcella... Makes me wonder if Marcella is going to be a part-time (in between marriages) member of Harry's harem.

Anyway, one has to wonder how did Merlin get to be remembered as a hero by wizards.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24
Amazing content!
Romavictrix chapter 16 . 9/25
Looking forward to harry getting together with all his loveley ladies in some smutty goodness. I like plot with smut stories and you have done a very good job of creating a storyline that will keep me entranced. Looking forward to more. O vote Narcissa needs to finish what they started. I vote for Harrys animagus form to be one of the four snakes mentioned. If there is an option for another I would recomend the dragon type that his ancestor had. Maybe do a familial animagus for each line. Idk . Lol its your story man Ill read regardless. I am looking forward to Dumbledore and camps reaction to Harry showing up. Pls make it epic. Sorry for the novel. Peace all!
A10riddick chapter 16 . 9/24
Damn good chapter! Can't wait for it to be picked up after your exams!

How could you leave a guy hanging like this at the ending of the chapter! Talk about being a cockblocker! lol
yanon1999 chapter 1 . 9/24
Was this a submission for the "How Many Cliches Can I Jam Into A Single Chapter" contest? Cuz you fucking won by a landslide. Also — Hadrian and Adrian? Seriously? You realize Adrian is literally a derivative of Hadrian?
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