I like this story! Please update soon!

exciting

So happy you’re back!

IM SO HAPPY TO SEE TWIST OF FATE ISNT ABANDONED! I LEGIT CRIED WHEN I GOT TO THE END AND REALIZED IT HADNT UPDATED IN MORE THAN A YEAR BUT I FAVORITED IT ANYWAY SO I WOULD BE NOTIFIED IF IT WVER CAME BACK AND THANK GOODNESS IT HAS AHHH

SUUUUUUUUPEEEEEEEEER

I love your story I cant wait to see more I feel like I might have read your old story. (I pretty much read everything in the ASL Whitebeard no oc genre) it's off to a great start glad to see that you didn't give up and finally decide to write it.

This was so funny! I love your writing style. A little wacky with the right amount of action.

Okay, so, your story at the beginning was really funny. I'm glad you're picking back up on this fic! I'll admit, I never read the orginal. The premise seems solid though. I like that Jinbe is being proactive about Arlong too.

A great story so far, keep up the good work.

Aww sweet little luffy :D
cant wait for more interations between our lovable asl trio and the flying pineapple and a fighting poof haha xD

umm still too short to know how this will turn out but i will keep following

and its should be impossible for them to get to Cocoyasi Village directly and if they some how do then alot more then a few days

would prefer that they got to some other island and plan their future and a little later on they got to Cocoyasi Village and meeting whitebeard crew

( i think that Cocoyasi Village should be at least 1 month in sea from goa ) but hey that only im thinking and that not the main point of the story
anyway good writing and we will see where its go

Awww jajaj hambre o morir ,difisil desicion XD jaja si su edad y sus obvios problemas para mantenerse seguros no son un catel de "adoptanos somos niños sin hogar " No se que mas ,llamaria su atencion XD

Let's see... Ace, Sabo and Luffy escape Dawn Island early and do so together. ASL meet up with Thatch and Marco early. Arlong is defeated early. Luffy encounters Nami and Nojiko early. Bell-Mère actually survives.

I'm all in.

I’m so happy that it’s back

Seems good! I always love the asl/whitebeard stories!
Can't wait to see how they will handle Arlong