It's cute, but I definitely see where Josh is coming from and I don't think Carly needs to go on stage. lol

Great chapter, love the J & D focus.

lol love this thank you for continuing this amazing story

Great chapter! Nice kick-off to the convention. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

“I've loved you for more than a decade. I fell in love with you because of your wit, and your smile, and your indomitable spirit. And honestly, with the way you challenged me, sometimes I thought maybe you WERE a closet Republican. God knows you dated enough of them. I will always love you. Even if you became a Republican." —- I love how you wrote this. Donna really does have an indomitable spirit. And his love for her is unconditional, and Josh absolutely wants to make sure that Donna knows that.

I love all the banter between them; you’ve really captured their dynamic.

As always, well done! I look forward to the next update. I’ll buy a donut and coffee for the occasion :)

Lol, I love watching them watching the RNC.

With the actual RNC starting this week, the timing of this chapter is perfect. Can't wait for more. I love this AU.

Another fun installment. I'm definitely in the camp that believes the only thing that could keep Josh away from politics is Donna (and in this case, his daughter), and it never gets old to see them being simply happy together.

love the way you write them as a couple keep up the great work

That was a sweet chapter!

The tissues were needed in the middle. Poor Josh it's never easy to discipline the kids esp one who is such a daddy's girl. lol

Ok, the part where Josh records the video literally had me in tears. *sniff* You manage to infuse these stories with such genuine love. It's absolutely beautiful.

This one was very vivid. It all felt so real, like something you've had experience with. I know it's a pretty standard moment in a kid's life. It made me feel objectively bad for Donna because she's the one who deals with the discipline it seems, and that's a tough place for a parent (not saying that Josh doesn't because obviously...). I think the interesting part will be if Josh and/or Lulu fesses up to the crime or if they'll keep it quiet. I know after all these years, I come out with things that stun my mother that the other parent never wanted us to reveal. Lulu seems savvy enough to know how to keep a secret if it means not rocking the boat.

I should review more often, I’m sorry I don’t. But I am always happy to see a new chapter of your story in my mail box. I really love these versions of Josh & Donna. Happy, adulting and in love. I wish NBC would bring them together again just like you have.

Aww, Josh’s first time-out. I think you handled it great though. Great chapter as always!