I got an idea how about you upload once a month with this story not in a rude way in a nice way

I'm great that you continue this story can you do where after the hubba hubba then a couple months later they have 2 children and that when they get captured by the evil people when Owen try's to stop them and you know the movie

No sempies Charlie echo and delta nuuuuu!

I don't want echo delta and Charlie to die!

Hey, how are you? Cool chapter by the way.

You excited for Jurassic World Dominion? Lemon chapters are too uncomfortable for me to write, as I havent written any fanfictions for a while because I was taking a break and reading what everyone else is writing until I regain interest to write them again. Have a good day.

A little short and a few grammar spelling issues here and there, but overall a rather entertaining story. However the biggest issue is that you killed off charlie, delta and echo you monster. Lol. Could of had a raptor harem going on lol. Thats not my reason though, I just adore the raptor squad and hated the fact that 3 of the 4 were killed off.

Anyway keep up the good work, I look forward to reading some more.

interesting story so far, can't wait to see what will happen later on

whelp by the time their done jason going to be tired as hell with blue being the one who going to be sore but hey they want a kid and well that's the cost of starting life though ill feel more bad for jason when blue goes through her mood swings before the egg laying

Thank you for the update. Please update as soon as you can. I really love this story. Please make a happy ending. Make jason and blue stay alive forever and together and have hatchlings please.

Nice chapter. Update when you can.

Great work love your work i can’t wait for next chapter and can’t wait for the baby’s raptors

Another good chapter! After the Fallen Kingdom arc is over, I'd imagine Jason and Blue, along with their babies, living a peaceful life in the woods of Northern California or Canada. Plenty of prey (such as deer, elk, moose, raccoon, possum, etc), lots of forest and places to hide from hunters/poachers. (:

Good chapter! I reckon, Jason and Blue's hatchlings would probably look a bit more raptorish (with Jason's colors) in my opinion. Considering, Blue is a full raptor and Jason is only half. I wonder if Jason's inner instincts rise up again? (:

Good work! Glad to see an update for this! Ooh! I hope Jason and Blue will be able to get kids/raptor hatchlings!

can you please do the sequel I really want to see Jason in the next story and with blue and there offspring