Reviews for Molten Core |
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![]() ![]() Its interesting but moves a bit too fast with too little detail or explanation |
![]() ![]() Hum... One For All is only transferable through Digestion of willingly given DNA. So... that means that Izuku can eat with his hands, and One For All can willingly give itself. Interesting. Also... wut teh fak is that thing squirming around inside All Might?! I think you mean Endeavor? Also, how powerful is Izuku's fire now? He was molten core previously. So with One for All boosting it, is he a miniature star? Hot enough you could call him the 'Sun of Inko' instead of 'Son of Inko'? |
![]() ![]() You wrote skun instead of skin. Also several sentences don't make sense. One is "you're "without an individuality" so..." What does that even mean, it's three sentence fragments that do not even make a whole sentence when combined. |
![]() ![]() He doesn’t need a sword tbh. And who wants to inherit enemies. Why is it now his responsibility, he could just decline the legacy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work I look forward to more |
![]() ![]() Keep up the good work. Im loving it so far and it has my OTP! Also, headCase seem hilarious! Can’t wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() This is a really good start, keep up the good work, I can’t wait to hear what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did UA just hire the Genie from Aladdin? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shoto should love that man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool quirk, can’t wait to see where this story goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story so far is really cool. I am interested to see how everything goes. Nice job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() His power looks more like Magma from X-men, than Akainu. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far looking forward to reading more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa great premise ,looking forward to more! Update soon! |