I’m so enjoying the slow pace of your story and the obstacles you’ve generated. Well done!

Thanks for the update. Poor Carlisle, stuck in the house because of the sun. He was so awkward in the car that I can see him really putting his foot in his mouth. Lets hope none of the Quileute come to visit while he's there. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.

Love how God is setting them up by making him have to stay with her a bit longer

These two are just adorable together. Poor Carlisle, lying so much to keep up appearances. His mooning over Bella is just sweet. I like those small moments of tension you set between them. And now they're trapped together sum more! *grins* Hope you're well

Ahh I’m liking this Bella and Carlisle story. Will Charlie be Rosalie’s mate? Can’t wait for the next update.

Yes, our boy is now stuck and has no choice but to stay with Bella. At least for a little while yet. Hehe. I love the growing feelings and tension between these two. It was lovely reading some background info on these two and see how they're slowly starting to open up to each other. In my mind, I can picture this pairing better than Edward and Bella.
Great chapter. Well done.

Thank you for the update!

Oooh, finally we get some interaction between Carlisle and and Bella. I am looking forward to the progression between these two.
I do wonder who vandalized the store? Are you going to be sticking to original storyline somewhat? Or is this going to be an original mystery?
I really enjoyed reading Bella and Audrey. Audrey really is a spunky one.
Great chapter. Well done.

Thanks for the update. Bella definitely picking up on something different now. It will be interesting to see if the conversation on the ride home is as awkward as the one in the supermarket. And I'm glad she avoided having to ride home with Jake. I will be looking forward to the next chapter whenever it is ready for us.

Looking forward to some more Bella-Carlisle interactionThanks for updating!

Oh yes! They met again in a store of all places, and it was so sweet! "Hello, Isabella." This was reminiscent of those gothic vampire novels where the dark stranger makes an appearance. They can't seem to stay away from each other? I liked how they learn more about the other from tiny mundane details and it makes them even more intrigued. *licks fingers clean of that tension* Great update.

Thank you for the update. Looking forward to more interactions between Bella and Carlisle!

They are getting to know each other! So sweet!

Thank you for the update!

So excited to see another update (and the news on ODaES)! I personally love the pacing and getting into the world you’re building. Their interactions are so worth the wait. Slow burns (with some pining, of courseare the best!