Reviews for Pokemon Santiago Version - Kanto
PrankK1ng chapter 1 . 7/29
Ronnies team are Dunsparce, honchkrow, magmortar, heracross, omastar, hitmomchan while clyde’s are donphan, magnezone, cloyster, porygon-z, kabutops, and slowking
HISawesomness chapter 1 . 6/28
Ronnie Anne's team was Dunsparce, Honchrow, Magmortar, Heracross, Hitmonchan, and Omastar
Fanfictionranger chapter 1 . 6/18
Wait this isn't a Ronnie Ann x Lincoln story is it?
KRUSA1 chapter 1 . 6/14
okay i got a new fanfic idea that i want you to hear: in the time since "Pokémon loud version" Lynn sr has more or less made up with Lincoln and is trying to make his restaurant the best in town, but he has been struggling: not only with rising competition but also with his guilt over the "events" that lead to Linc's journey through kanto in the first place...but one day a mysterious visitor appeared in his restaurant he offered Lynn an opportunity: help him with a very important task and he will give Lynn a massive collection of recipes that will give Lynn a much needed edge against the competition Lynn(unable to resist the culinary call of the wild and needing a much needed vacation to clear his head over the Lincoln thing)decides to take the man's offer, the man's name is jack and he is about to introduce Lynn to the world of fighting foodons (it's about time the fighting foodons get some fanfic love, if you don't know what fighting foodons is then let me sum it up as best i can, also known as bistro recipe, it's a sort of culinary take on the monster collecting genre started by Pokémon it's one of those hidden gems you can find on amazon prime for free)
Yellowpikmin88 chapter 1 . 3/7
Man this is off to a great start. I'm so excited to see where it goes from here and how their story will converge with Lincoln's down the line.
KRUSA1 chapter 1 . 2/25
I know one guy with a pretty bad sense of direction:the galar champion Leon
DragonEmperor999 chapter 1 . 2/25
this was awesome and again I love the Pokémon choices for Ronnie Anne, Clyde & Bobby
KRUSA1 chapter 1 . 2/24
okay real talk: when you finish your current projects(these 2 stories)I got an idea for a possible sequel: a crossover with "little witch academia" at least read this and think over it...now the summary: 3 years had passed since the missile incident that nearly destroyed the world and Akko is excited: she and her friends will be starting their 3rd year at Luna nova...at least she would be if she hadn't be having strange dreams involving dragons and wolves and a giant hand in the sky and she is convinced that they maybe a sign of things to come after an encounter with a man riding a orange dragon(Leon and his Charizard)Akko gets flung into an exciting new adventure as she travels throughout the galar region with 2 goals in mind: 1. become the new galar champion and 2. revive the lost art of Pokémon magic
Victor John Foxfire chapter 1 . 2/24
HAH! That Omake at the end was pretty much Ryoga in a Nutshell! I mean, if he ever got Pokémon, he may end up bringing them back to Nerima!

Though I'm surprised Roronoa Zoro isn't there either. Guy can get lost in a Straight Corridor... Even with Proper directions, and navigation tools.

I mean, Ryoga's problem can be fixed with a Guide Dog or a Properly functional GPS unit, since Ranma 1 1/2 occurs where he doesn't have access to the latter.

Zoro can get lost with BOTH of those, and this is also considering that he was given directions and info to help him. (On Skypiea, he literally had a Bird that always faced South Following him, and he kept arguing with it. Also, he got lost in Dracule Mihawk's castle, for two days, even AFTER he was given directions.)

So yeah, frankly, I can see Zoro actually turning up in a second "Directionally Challenged" Omake. XD

Anyway, I can see Bobby and Clyde having a Looooong Road ahead of them, with Bobby having to deal with a Jumpscarer who needs to scare him to survive, and Clyde with a Slowpoke that's waaaaay slower than normal. I mean, sure, the former has it handled, but there's gonna be a time and place where it's not a good idea...
KRUSA1 chapter 1 . 2/17
so if Ronnie will only be getting 3 canon badges does that mean only Lincoln will be getting the 5 remaining canon badges?
DragonEmperor999 chapter 1 . 2/17
Awesome start dude

Can’t wait for more
KRUSA1 chapter 1 . 2/13
I have suggestions for 2 types for Ronnie to face: fairy and fighting
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11
After reading the first chapter of this story, I think the true function of the Tidal Bell should be giving confidence to the person/Trainer wielding the Bell while simultaneously healing the Pokemon of said person/Trainer from recent injuries. Since Ronnie Anne and Clyde both have the silver wings from Lugia that (seemingly) give them the understand and talk with their Pokemon without Lisa's invention, Bobby having a confidence boost from the Tidal Bell seems more realistic.

While Bobby is a nice guy, he tends to be a little on the slow side in saying what he wants to say without sounding like a wimp or in knowing what his main priorities are and where they lie as a Pokemon Trainer. For instance, Bobby's main priority is taking care of his sister and Clyde on their journey, but he has yet to know where his passion as a Pokemon Trainer truly lies, especially when the revelation in Pokemon Loud Version - Kanto strains his relationship with Lori to the point of needing space from her despite loving her. Not to mention the fact that Bobby is scared of his own (albeit scary Ghost-Type) Pokemon!

Having the Tidal Bell could strengthen Bobby's confidence in regards with his choices while at the same time ensuring his Pokemon are well taken care of. This might help strengthen his relationship with his Pokemon too!

Anyways, that's MY input of the Tidal Bell. I hope that when you update this story in your own time, the next chapter will be awesome. Who knows, maybe Clyde might see his own Slowpoke evolve into the Slowking from his dreams with the Shellder and King's Rock in Cinnabar Island! That'd be neat.
DSX62415 chapter 1 . 2/12
Alright, a new part of the saga for me to folloe. Nice.

Now for my answers to questions 2 and 3:

Maybe have the bell be used to summon Lugia and the legendary birds during a mass team rocket attack, and as for gyms, what about dark, steel and dragon type ones?
Czar Joseph chapter 1 . 2/8
2/8/2020 - That was the first long chapter for the beginning of the Santiago sibs: Ronnie Anne and her big brother Bobby, and includes Clyde McBride for their Pokemon Journey to join in Lincoln and his co.

As they arrived in Five Islands with Prof. Ivy and her assistants for their Pokémon Exam. And so they passed within out results of 85 or 100%

As before they'll making a mock battle until someone, named Selphy, gets lost with no sense of direction. So decide to help the search will considered part of the test if encounters some Pokemon with Prof. Ivy's assistants will observe their results.

Ronnie and Hope encounters a Murkrow who stole her lucky charm until she caught it and passed.

Clyde and Charity encounters a Slowpoke, but dump as when that Pokémon and Psyduck were being slow to respond. Clyde wanted to have a Slowking so he wanted for respond if caught a Slowpoke. And that was expecting and awkward to catch it since if Prof. Ivy didn't mind along with Charity.

And lastly is Bobby and Faith, in the Lost Cave, the former has Natu, and assists the search. Until they found Selphy and a Wild Misdreavus. And Bobby caught it which he's the last he passed. So he receives a Trainer's license as well besides the PokéDex.

Now Ronnie and Clyde were official compete the same tournament as Lincoln does by going their journey.

Until the three were being watched unaware by the group who is searching for Selphy. Which happens to be the Legendary Pokémon, Lugia, besides Ho-Oh who selects Lincoln as Chosen and while Ronnie and Clyde were becomes his.

Afterwards, they were depart, and I kinda feel bad for Faith for Dunsparce since Ronnie Anne has it.

Now proceed to their journey to Cinnabar Island, Ronnie Anne, Bobby, and Clyde will get a known their respective Pokémon. Until this is take time to get their new companions.

While they were on their way, they were curious about Pokémon fossils.

Now, Prof. Ivy contact Prof. Oak regarding Ronnie Anne, Booby, and Clyde passed the Trainer's Exam and made officials. Includes regarding both parties interacts with Ho-Oh and Lugia and being respectively blessed.

And so, things are lot interesting for this journey.

Now, both powerful Pokémons made conversation regarding their Chosens. Sending Big 3 of the Sky and while the Johto counterparts were under watch.

And so, that was an awesome start, and I am sure get work on the wiki, later.

So, keep it up besides Lincoln's Journey.

Before that, here are list of Ronnie and her small group caught before tame their respective Pokémon after reading the last part:

AVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVA

~ Ronnie Anne ~
- Dunsparce
- Murkrow

~ Clyde ~
- Phanpy
- Slowpoke

~ Bobby ~
- Natu
- Misdreavus

AVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVAVA

Its a start, so keep it up!
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