Neat, but how did Thalia get revived(turned human again)? Also like that you had Emerald meet a good influence, maybe you could do the same with Mercury(by which I mean meeting someone from Percy’s world and being helped by them) I was thinking Luke but he didn’t redeem himself in this universe.

I'm personally a bit uncomfortable with this. There was no real reason in my eyes for Bianca, and possibly Kronos to be there.

HALLELUJAH
BROTHERS AND SISTERS
LET'S SING

Man i though you were dead! Glad you’re back pls update again soon good job on this chapter and i loved it but honestly I would’ve preferred nico to bianca simply because of the foil bianca while not naive or peppy is infinitely more kind and cheerful Than nico He is a serious, negative, and highly intimidating character that foils nicely with just about anyone from the rwbyverse plus bianca has primarily shadow and dark flame power While nico is proficient with necromancy which is way cooler and i wanna see the crews reaction to the fact that he fights with a skeleton army, maybe bring nico over later (After his time in Tartarus and the jar) and you can foil cheerful bianca with the scarred damaged nico, also pls bring nico i wanna read cinders smug ass reaction to leos looks she tries to roast him and hes just like wow that was a really weak fire it’d be hilarious reading her popping a blood vessel trying to roast leo but maybe you could do that with percy cuz of his heat resistance i mean he survived having lava thrown at him before so... and maybe bring Tyson over and he and rwby could be friends over their skills with weapon crafting him and yang with his strength him and blake with his enhanced senses and him and weiss because he is percy’s brother and he’s like mentally 8 or so i think.

I see you.

Excellent work on this chapter I really did not see that coming and also welcome back :)

Glad to see you’re back to writing

Yay! We're back in business!

Great job please continue

Ah yeah, saw this on the Archive, really loved the story. Going to be entirely honest, your English was grating for the first few chapters. Once I got used to it, it has a certain charm. I'm going to watch your career with great interest. :D

I really hope that you can come up with an idea for the next chapter. This is a really good fanfic -and 've read hundreds if not thousands(Lots of procrastination and free time)- and I enjoy it a lot. I've gone through so many other fanfics that waste so much quality from the idea, and actually have found this fanfic that I find to be enjoyable, humerous, and very well put together.

Well, I mean what you wrote is still in Drakes personality. You know the Emo Edge Lord

Would you please be willing to ask someone to adopt this or put in the comments up for this style is how you put put Percy into the rwbyverseIf something fans of RWBY crossover fics, Really like to knowledge nobody have ever Rwbyfied A characters arsenal And made their powers a semblance like you have.

Awesomeness

Please update this soon.