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great chapter.

man this is a awesome story can you please put cana in the harem she's beautiful and she's not used very much in a naruto pairing

please update again

Isn't -kun is used for boys and -chan for girls or little kids? Or is Erza boy in this story?

something different from canon is always more interesting to read. liked train situation. always only battles makes it less interesting

Nice chapter
When will you update reading lame god
Keep writing and stay safe

Fucking awesome update soon

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Naruto is 15 at the beginning and one month later he is 13?

Naruto es demasiado OP?

Scala de caelum, I think it would be a nice change of pace and open the realm of possibility for why mjolnir and whitebeard's bisento along with a number of other otherworldly items were found in that shop.

I think you could even make a nice subplot for it. Scala de caelum, the stairway to heaven, an alternate dimension found abandoned by court wizards under the employ of fiore's royal family. Now used by fiore to pit the most well known wizards from all over tge world against each other in an effort to prove who was the strongest.

Obviously that wouldn't line up with the plot normally, but if you think about it, why would the truly strongest in earthland bother to attend a tournament for a title he honestly doesn't give a shit about when it isn't actually given by the strongest person alive themself?

A prequel really, to raise notoriety in earthland and give naruto a chance to really stretch his legs in an environment that doesn't have anyone to hurt outside of his competitors.

Long live Stan Lee btw! May he rest in peace in all the worlds he gave birth to. Excelsior!

So, you seriously need to figure out what age Naruto is. In the very first chapter he is one year older then Jellal and erza, making him twelve when they escape the tower. Then in the next you have him at fifteen in the beginning, then thirteen later on (which is what he SHOULD be if he is a year older than Erza). Then in this chapter you say he's seventeen.

He should be fifteen at the most according to the first statement that he was a year older than Erza. who is only one year older than Natsu. Either way, you need to pick an age and stick with it. This is more confusing than the way Kishimoto keeps track of ages.

I'm digging this so far. Can't wait to see more. Though I did come for an overpowered Naruto, I think him defeating Acnologia the way that he did was a bit much.

Well done chapter.