holy shit, Yuki has a fucking terrible life. Have a good day.

I have to say while I like the general concept of seeing the world through a villian's eyes, so far you're not executing it well. That might have changed in later chapters, but I'm reviewing chapter by chapter as I feel the need to.

I get that this is his backstory and you're giving him reasons to hate heroes and become a villian, but the justification in this chapter is terrible. All you're doing is breaking two characters and a core concept of the MHA world to fit your narrative, which I guess isn't all that bad if there are good reasons for it, but the problem is when it becomes unbelievable to the readers.

I find it extremely unlikely professional heroes like Kamui Woods and Mt. Lady would not notice someone screaming in distress, and if by some miracle they did, they would not be so nonchalant about it afterwords. It is their literal job to save people, quirkless or not. Heroes do not hold the same prejudices the common folk do. They would most likely not be heroes for long if they did (Bakugo is just an asshole).

Further more their reaction doesn't make sense. They didn't know he was quirkless, why react like they don't care about someone they're supposed to protect? There are multiple examples of heroes putting the safety of the people first and foremost. We are literally given the text book play-by-play of how you're supposed to save people during the provisional license exam.

I'm 11 chapters in and I'm just in awe. I love his motivations, is design I can picture in my head and the fact he has awesome powers. I love how his powers are more like Sandman but has motivations closer to Electro in the Amazing spiderman 2. Even that first scene with him and Deku was so much like Electro and Spiderman and I loved every bit of it.

Well, this was shit.

"aggorgantly" ? Wow, to make so many mistakes in a single word...did it take you long, to train to be able to do that ?

Very unique read. Made me uncomfortable some times but was overall a blast to read through. Very well done ending too, leaving room to continue this somehow, definitely have my eyes open for your stories from here out!

Congratulation on the finishing the story. It woulds be interesting to have the bomb in another location and the fight elsewhere. So no matter how the fight went Yuki wins in the end. Then reading the reaction of how the world changes to loss of quirks and how people respond to it. If not a weapon against tourma or all for one or MLA.

Dude all I have to say is congratulations on completely this story! I had an absolute blast reading it and I enjoyed every bit of it! I'm excited to see what you'll have cooked up for the future and I wish you luck on all of it! Keep rocking on with your writing!

that kid is probably a shuttin otaku ok what am I saying we all are

author ... you fucking smart little bitch, that was amazing, I got goosebumps when he killed the people who were calling him Monster

Fuck Izuku he's a bitch only reason he's preaching is cause he got a quirk or he would be just as bitter I was waiting for him to just start an Ice Age on the whole planet

Him having a immortality was a great idea.

This was freakin awesome, I loved all the Electro references!

I really hope you finish this story some day because it just got real!

Not to mention that this reminds me of how Sand Man got his power.

so far i love this story and i am disappointed that it is ending but i also think you made this story go too fast because what has it been like a week and in no situation could all of this have happened in a week. but despite that i love your writing style and hope you do more my hero academia fan fiction. big fan keep it up!