i hope ironwood gets his ass handed to him, he literally made an enemy against the one person that was protecting them...

Cinder is definitely going to turn into a heartless, with how recklessly (and egotistically, if thats even a thing) she's using it, it's only a matter of time...

Well shit I know Ironwood is stupid but really... anyways this is the second time I’ve read this... in 4 days. I really like it. It’s not often I do that so it’s really caught my interests, and with frequent updates you got yourself a big fan now. Now I only have one question where is Sora... I looked back at the chapters A/N’s and got my answer and I gotta say smart on that. I’m excited to read more and can’t wait to see James get what’s coming to him.

Fools all around. Ironwood in his paranoia. And Cinder using a power she emits she dose not understand. And yet still has the gall to think she has mastered it in any way.

I hope Ruby is not going let him arrest her.

I liked how you used flow motion for the fight.
Well Ironwood is an idiot, i hope Ozpin will show up to stop him maybe with a recording of the fight.

Ironwood his such a fool i hope a keyblade master or Sora even vanish(temporary) go save ruby and prove her innocence.

Well...crap baskets.

Hopefully by vol. 3 the folks at Disney Castle will start their investigation of the situation.

You do that, will not matter

0-0 what?

we screw you too Ironwood!

Ah fack.

The heartless are here! Good luck with talking your way out of this Ruby.
Can't wait to see how Ozpin and Ironwood will react to them.

0-0 oh *beep* they're hybrids!