loved it!

Hahahahaha that ending was hilarious. It was short but definitely worth the read.

Pretty amusing little story. Brief but enjoyable. I'm glad you're feeling better!

LOL! I love the way you write Sam, she is a lot of fun.

Sir I applaud and bow down before you at how you started and ended this. You really put the punch in punchline. In other simple words: I loved this and hope you write more.

I swear to god if canon Sam was like your Sam then I think LH would grow in popularity. Hell I'm kind of hoping that they do another spin off with Sam and they make her turn out like yours! Honestly that would be a spin off I would watch and enjoy. Unlike the Ronnie Anne one which I just could care less about and honestly find cringey as hell.

Anyway before I go on a rant about making your Sam canon, or at the very least finding someone to draw a fan comic of your Aces Wild story, let me say this:

I'm sorry I reviewed dump on the last chapter of Aces Wild. As I mentioned before I got sick just when you posted the chapter and reading, reading the entire story and writing reviews with some of my thoughts were a way to distract myself from my symptoms (and no it wasn't the corona in case you're wondering. Sigh way too many people asked me that for my liking) until they got bad enough that I spend a few days resting and trying to sleep it off. I had to miss work because of it and had to make up for it which is why I took so long. Mainly because I forgot about it until now.

So feel free to delete my reviews if you feel like they clutter things. I think you can as an author, especially if it's a non-user review. Hell I remember using a review to call out an author for plagiarizing a crossover story and they deleted it.

PS (sorry): I don't mention it before but I've been entertaining the thought about Carol being a closet pervert and in exchange for forgiving her Lori has to has to hear out her fantasies and give her feed back. Why? I just find it funny if Lori ended up acting all awkward around Linc and her family and also has to take several cold showers because of it.

And I brought this up before but I can also picture Lola, if she wants a piece of Linc too, to have accepted she'll have to share him but demands the girls make him the perfect man for her when she makes her move. And that he knows all and is a pro at all of those massaging "techniques" she heard (overheard/eavesdropped on) about from the moms and older girls at pageants. She has no real idea what they are but knows they are good from the tones used. Can you picture the older girls reactions to Lola asking they teach Lincoln some act or position? Sam I can see her smile and promise she'll him a pro at it.

And I also mention a What-If clone future scenario didn't I? That I can picture Lisa using her machine to see how that would turn out, which is basically a plot right out of an H-manga. Lisa explains why she won't try to clone Lincoln but Sam doesn't get it and sees nothing wrong with what will happen. Lisa clearly explains that they're lives will be spend being pampered by the clones, spending genuine quality time with the clones and each other as the Linclones make sure they well taken care and help the girls live out their dreams.

However the catch is that 90% of their time is spend engaging in various sexual acts with the clones. Basically they end up as the clones sex toys. Sam still doesn't see the problem and the rest of the girls slowly and internally side with Sam as Lisa keeps trying to get through to her. I can the girls giving very fake responses of agreeing with Lisa or saying that it sounds horrible. Well expect for Leni. Sam I can see asking Lisa to stop as they all have girl boners already and tell what was the catch/downside with the clones.

But I ask myself how Lisa would ultimately react at the end of that conversation, aside from anger and trying to kill Sam. One way I can see her reacting is she destroys her work on cloning and her What-If machine or at the very least make sure Sam and the other girls couldn't try to get to it. Another reaction is that she talks herself into wanting to do it, kind of like the way how Homer did during the Halloween special episode in which the Springfield were turned into animals. That or Leni gets her to agree to it through her Leni Way.

Damn I wrote more than I meant to. Sorry, this will be the last time. The rest of my reviews will be very short I promise.

But one more thing:

Blond Alliance Lucy for the Win! (Sam, Leni, Lola, Carol and Lucy) Honestly I can see those girls really taking control of the maybe Lincoln Harem.

I got a big laugh out of that ending, good grief you had me going good there. The build up to the punchline was so good, I thought for sure you'd actually have Lincoln and Sam have sex. You're a comedic genius of an enormous caliber!

I swear Siege is really Sam in disguise.

Wonderful. Amazing. Stupendous. Now give us the rest.

plz

Pretty cool chapter. Admittedly, I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

Think you can write a few more like this? One shots in which Sam gets one of her maybe harem sisters involved in some sex game with Lincoln with the girls breaking character or reacting in some funny way. With Lisa I can her hooking up Sam to the Matrix and letting her think they did what she wanted.

Lucy: Vampire/blood ritual play with Lucy using a trick knife and scaring the hell of Sam.

Lynn: Amazon fantasy or something involving a play fight that turns real because of Lynn and the cops get called. That or Sam gets Lynn to do dog play but Lynn, as a means to get back at Sam, takes things really serious and far. Both the girls back down and get arrested for indecent exposure when Sam takes Lynn out for a walk.

This was pretty great, man. I already told you what I thought, but goes without saying once more: you nailed one sexy build up for a spicy love affair. Then bulldozed it all with a corny joke. This is certainly a Sam story, heh. But we wouldn't like her half as much if she didn't excite us then make our lungs strain from laughter.