| Reviews for Luke and Leia's Excellent Adventure |
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The Lord of Hate chapter 26 . 7/21 This story is hilarious, but I find myself rather disappointed with this latest chapter. This timeline was one of the finest that I have seen arise in the story, what with the toles reversed. The previous chapter was a delight to read, with Emperor Yoda and O-bee-Wan Kenobee, as well as Darth Sidious being reduced to the role of Aunt Beru, of all people. The introduction of Genesis 24 in this one, I'm sorry to say, has been rather disappointing. It would have been glorious to read about an independently evil, Machiavellian Yoda and his hive-mind of Jedi, as Luke and Leia joined their father and Uncle Palpatine to save the galaxy... A pity, really, but great job on the story. And TROS was dogs' breakfast, whatever any may say. Force-teleports, healing cauterised wounds and resurrection? It tastes like so much copious vomit. |
laurapal chapter 26 . 7/21 That was a fun thought experiment. And the Skywalkers were reunited in the end so that's great. I haven't watched the sequels. My main interest in SW being the Skywalkers but the new force powers are intriguing to read about. |
DarkStorm98 chapter 26 . 7/18 Well, binging through all these has been kind of a doozy. It was very interesting seeing a load of timelines rather than one. I mean, sometimes I feel like a timeline should have more details fleshed out or be revisited, but I understand that focusing that much on any timeline isn't the point. This one though, oh boy did this throw me for a loop, lmfao. Keep up the good work, I would love to see more. Although I still think most of these timelines still really could be very compelling stories on their own. |
IDidn'tSignUp4This chapter 26 . 7/16 Yeah...TROS is a hot dumpster fire. But I'm not here for discussing the sequels, I'm here for fun family times, and boy! Did you deliver those. I especially liked as a plot point how bad Obi-Wan felt about injuring Anakin. That poor man i never going to forgive himself. And the reveal of Genesis 24 was...surprising, I'd say. Does the name have a special meaning? |
glosty ben chapter 25 . 7/15 well, this is an... interesting time. |
TheVampireStrahd chapter 26 . 7/15 What? This is it? Awww, I was expecting a little more fun and chaos before the end of Emperor Yoda. Oh well. I really thought your idea of reversing light/dark sides was amazing, would have loved to have seen more of it. |
HaywireEagle chapter 19 . 7/15 Not really. The gravitational forces would tear the Death Star apart. It is the size of a small moon after all. Then there would be the other issues it would cause. The attempt would cause catastrophic damage to everything. It would alter the planet's crust, orbit, and such. Just lots of bad juju. |
HaywireEagle chapter 5 . 7/15 Well, his emergency powers weren't invoked until shortly after Padme left. War wasn't officially declared until Geonosis when the Jedi actually attacked and sparked things off rather dramatically. So...yeah. Some errors in this one. Crack fic I know but can we get the timeline at least a bit right? |
Lowbacca's Roar chapter 26 . 7/15 Just binge read a bunch of chapters. Wow, those last two were quite the twist! Also, YISS, BABY YODA! All hail The Child and his tsundere daddy. Keep up the good work! |
Brievel chapter 26 . 7/15 "Sheev Palpatine rolled his eyes. Jedi were always so dramatic," has to be the best part of the whole thing. xD I love what you did with all of it! |
Jeda31 chapter 26 . 7/15 Oh my word, that was an absolutely awesome and hilariously sensationally magnificent ending to that alternate weird and stunning quirky gem of a universe crying out fir heroes to rescue from the evil of the hive mind. Utterly loved the takedown scene of effectively once they cut the link between Yoda and the hive mind, that the Jedi were freed immediately and all that remained was to cut the bug creative into a thousand little pieces. Also have to say that I utterly loved the fluffy and gorgeously cute happy ending of the Skywalkers taking the now child like Yoda into their home and repairing the damage done to him with love and family as the raise him alongside their own twins. |
Morriganna chapter 26 . 7/15 Awww! This was epic and enjoyable! More soon! |
evan17w chapter 26 . 7/15 I can't even. |
ELinkA chapter 26 . 7/15 That's some high quality crack |
Guest chapter 25 . 7/12 Please make it anidala! |