Wonderful story!

Perfect ending. You’re right, sometimes less is more. I like the chicken nuggets part, and the “chickens are friends not food”, bit. Hilarious!

I’ve been meaning to tell you how well I think you write Didymus. You’ve got his actions and his speech right on point. I enjoy that very much. It’s also so new to me to see Jareth so vulnerable. I know the story you based it on, but still, it’s Jareth. I’m really enjoying this.

I like the idea of the golden ear cuffs. Very unique. Jareth is in a tough position. I understand where he’s coming from, but I don’t know where this dishonesty will lead. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Very nice story. I loved the running gag of "chickens are friends, not food".

I called it.
But this chapter was still an emotional rollercoaster.

I just know Jareth's plan is going to end up blowing up in his face.

Wow, he sacrificed a wing (and by extension, his ability to fly) for her. Damn.

Oh my God I am loving this story! The interaction with the goblins..."Chickens are friends, not food!" I died!

Very awesome story i enjoyed it very much. I always loved beauty and the beast and i love how you intertwined it with the Labyrinth lol Bravo ;)

I liked the part about the chess game. It would make sense that Jareth would be a highly intelligent player. I know exactly how he feels about no one loving him, wasting away, and nobody noticing his absence. That his life was worth nothing. I’ve been there and still go there at times. I hope things get better for him.

Ouch! Cutting off that wing was brutal. It reminded me of the times that Lucifer had done it, but he’s always seem to grow back. I’m waiting to see if that happens with Jareth in this story.

Well written and I enjoyed this one. I like the way that you described his wings and his flight. I have to say that the talk between the goblins about wings was hilarious. It sounds like some thing that Hansen might make up. And thank you for the shout out about the wings!

Sir Didymus always been one of my favorites, and you did a great job with his dialogue and such. It sounded just like him! I also had to laugh when I heard him tell Ambrosius to keep up. Very true to form!

I am liking this version. The way they banter about US politics is refreshing. It also underlines just how intelligent Jareth is, as well as Sarah. Looking forward to the next chapters!