Great so far despite the confusing transitions. One thing I still don’t understand is whats up with that romance in the first chapter between Shirou and Cinder. Really confused how that fits in. Do they already know each other or like whats going on?

Very interesting I look forward to where you take this story!

Damn, not only that Shirou is an Eroge protagonist, he's also a Thot Slayer

this book is amazing! keep it up

Fucking awesome!Cinder yandere! Hahahahaha! Man, this story is pure gold~

Okay, Im a little confused. I thought Cinder and Shirou were dating is this a flashback? Also, Is this heavens feel Shirou?

It is a great and captivating narrative that you've crafted in this story. I sincerely hope you'll update again soon, I'm looking forward to read what happens next. Keep up the good work!

Seems quite interesting so far, looking forward to what you do with it.

Este shirou me recuerda a Big Boss/naked snake(MGS V)

Awesome

Well shit Shirou, you've successfully both pissed-off and garnered the obsession of one of the worst women to share that duo of emotions with. That E-rank luck will end up making an EX-rank story. Loving this, and can't wait for the possibility of more. Thank you for this chapter!

curious... how did shirou come to Cinder's side

Wow, that is great story, original approach for such crossover. Keep going, it is very interesting.

This is a great yet sorrowful read. Like damn, Shirou is targetted to be put down by Remnant from his history. He's supposed to be used to going through hell and saving what he can but this is both harsh and refreshing. Looking forward to more with the interactions being the highlight. The effects pebble known as the Hero of Justice is interesting sight to see. This is the highlight of the fanfic for me. The multiple POVs and the effects shown in general. You can see where Archer is coming from when he was hanged.
Im not liking Shirou's chances but when has it ever been? Looking forward to more. Hope he could grind the gears of fate so Ozpin reconsiders having a SEMBLANCE of a plan or asking others for help. Also Yang having Aura she probably recieved a whammy or soul link of sorts. That's nasty considering what GARchers arm did.
Thanks for the story and have a great day author. Take care and God Bless.

This is becoming one of my favorites rwby crossovers on this site! Im eager to see how the relationship between Shirou and Cinder evolves, and his role in the events to come. I can't wait for the next chapter!