Oh oh oh oh my poor Petey-child I can't take it... Oh... I need to huggg himmm... Poor, poor, poor child... Cry cry cry I shall love you even if May doesn't... Sob

My poor poor heart was aching from the first to last line.

Wonderful. Just wonderful. This story, and "Vertigo", and I'm so glad you wrote them both.

Again, the Flash scene was possibly the best. Very beautiful.

Textbook, ha! I don't usually say this about people's OCs but... I really, and I mean REALLY hate Matt. He's horrible, a jerk, and I hope Loki gets him. And then Tony, then Thor, and then the rest of the Avengers in no particular order.

Although I'm a huge fan of "Smart Hulk" as the subtitles call him, I really was a fan of Banner as well, and so it's nice to see him again post-Endgame. Wonderfully progressing story, cannot wait to see how things turn out.

So glad there is a sequel! 3

Loved it

Tony's reaction is everything! He's apologetic and he doesn't blame Peter and his concern is entirely for Peter. When my parents found out I was self harming I only felt like I was an inconvenience. I think they were trying to be caring but also trying to tell me it wasn't okay and I don't think I've ever been more ashamed in my life. My family has always thought of me as over dramatic so I always think of myself as over dramatic. This is one of the first stories I've seen that talks about it like this. Thank you for making me feel not so alone.

This was a great story. I cannot say that I have ever experienced these feelings to such extremes since my parent don't abuse me, but I have felt them on a minor scale. (If I had a super power I would be an Empath. Even though I'm not 'emotional' I have a high level of empathy. I would be- like- a Black Widow version of Mantis. XD)
I think, that teenagers wouldn't be so dreaded and bad (coming from a teenager, before you shoot me. Please, I hate teen jokes that 'adults' pull. It's worse coming from twenty year olds that literally act like teenagers anyway) if parents knew about and how to utilize the five love languages. If you don't know what that is, I would suggest looking them up. If you are a parent, have your all your kids take the test as soon as they are old enough and look for the signs. Love languages are more important than you can know. When a person doesn't feel loved, feels hated, or simply neglected, it leads to all sorts of heart ache. So much could be avoided in every relationship if some one would take the time to learn how to love a person in their language. So don't speak Spanish to a Frenchman, please.
Again wonderful story, and if you find my rant annoying, please forgive me :D

I was very not ready for this story to end. I want so much more but you somehow ended it perfectly. Answered and resolved pretty much all the points.

You are an amazing writer and I am so happy you wrote this and the previous story. Thankyou.

Great job!

Great story with good continuation!

Great to see an sequel!

Oh damn, this story is so heartbreakingly beautiful, I loved it 3000.
Your portrayal of mental health is so accurate (I think it might be the best I've ever read), I'm so happy Peter got the happy ending he deserved. And thank you for your last author's note, it genuinely made me feel better and a little emotional haha. My family never really believed in my mental health, and I've literally fought with my dad about it in the past. So for someone to let me know that I'm not being dramatic, and I'll find healing, means a lot, thank you.

Man, I freaking loved Flash here, I'm sorry, Ned doesn't deserve Peter's forgiveness at all in my opinion. He just pissed me off so much (MJ too, but she did a way better job at making it up to Pete so I forgive her...plus I ship em really hard lol)
Also Tony Stark will forever be Marvel's best dad (super curious to know what was the Christmas present he got for Pete)
I hope you're doing okay/staying safe too, it is scary right now, but I'm staying optimistic that things will get better in the next couple weeks. Or at least by Easter :)
*two thumbs up*
-Luna